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by orotaku

person yui
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
new reader, and as of now a reader of all time till the end.
was that all! I was posetive there was a another chapter, but where is the button..."sad"....
its not that I believe the story is completed, far from it,
but I felt as if I had only read one chapter.
ahhh, do not keep me waiting for too long, I would really like to read the rest,
this is a orginal story (at least I think it is) and I find it really exciting the way
sasuske is acting, I love it.
keep on writing, and please do update soon (^_^)/
person Keishiki-Dono
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must update...must update...*Tries to hypnotize you by swinging a pendulum infront of my moniter*
person mitsune
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yosh! this one great fic i can never imagine neji-san doing the ddr and actually get the highest score let alone sasuke-kun, i wonder what score naruto-kun got? and now the movie is starting is it me or does naruto-kun has the hots for sasuke-kun from the beggining? i hope you plan on updating soon since i cant wait to read sasuke-kuns torture hehehe gambatte!
person AsanoMatsuya
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gigglesnort* I can just see them doing DDR...Afronova is getting a lot easier for me tho XD anyway! Great story so far, can't wait to read more!
person wouldn't-u-like-2-no
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is SO cute! I normaly don't like this pairing because mostly EVERYONE does it but this is just so cool! shy nerdish schoolboy sasuke and jok naruto...wonderful! simply wonderful!
person kurayami_ni_koorime
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D: *crys, for the button says there is no more goodness to be found* Wow... I dont think that I should be liking this fanfic as much as I am. This was supposed to be one of those quick reads that had been updated last night but now, today, Ive found myself wondering 'has it been updated?' and 'ahaha! DDR! Oh crap, broke a dish...' and the such. I [really] hope you write more soon! There was nothing in the way of gramatical mistakes, which makes me a [very] happy reader.
-kat
person EscagirlUK
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It... di.. uh... grrrr... Eeevilllll! Bad cliffie, bad! Update soon, please!
person DragonDame57
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgsh... i totally love uke-ish sasuke! it's so cute! ^^ i hope something happens soon..

ps. i'm a ddr fan as well! ^^v love end of the century and afronova.. although currently, i'm working on beating rhythm and police. on heavy. -_-;;
person Reyn
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! End of the Century rawks!! (jest played DDR today and passed the song with all goods and perfects) I can't beat Afronova yet...I always fail RIGHT before the song ends. mainly cuz I don't like cheating and jest hitting both side arrows at the same time...
person Moon_Shadow
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I love the story!! Even if Sasuke is a bit OOC...I STILL LOVE IT!!! Great job with the sotry, please update soon!!