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for Through His Heart

by qwer

person allyluv17
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting idea!!! please continue! and i really like your writing style :D
person Saki
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far it's good but make sure to reread your work. alot of spelling errors as far as I have seen and alittle more works on grammar. But keep it up.