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for Make My Heart Do Flips

by aiimeru

person Muchacha
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stalker Sasuke is funny, and loosing his composure screaming What?! is hilarious. Heehee, idiot. I'm giddy. This is just too cute! BL everywhere.
person snow887
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your fic so far, i think its cute. and man i was hoping that this wasn't a irunaru fic because that would seriously scare me. I think it would be pretty funny if the person iruka liked was kakashi XD it would make things very interesting. i'm such a big kakairu fan, well i hope you update soon so i can see what happens next >:D *eagerly waits*
person silverfox
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting i'm enjoying this very much so keep up the good work
person vampchic
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe!! This chapter was diffinitely cute and funny!*Says in a sing song voice* Sasuke's in deniel! And Naruto started to confess to Iruka! Cant wait to read the next chap. Update soon, kay? I need to find out everyones reactions!!
person Trollmia
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, poor, poor Sasuke....
It's such a cute story and I'm enjoying it very much...
Gives me the an eerie need to squeal!! *ihhhhhh kawaiiiiiii*
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That ending is making me blush! Naruto's crush is revealed to Sasuke and he couldn't keep his mouth shut!! What an embarrassing predictment!! UPDATE SOON!!
person Sukara
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kakakaka!! xD Naruto dosen't want teh play to be ruined because he wants to be near Iruka. xD Kakakakakakaka..xD
person vampchic
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, that was very cute! And that script really sounds messed up! Cant wait to read more, especially the part where the two starts to practice theire more intimate scenes! Update soon, kay?
person blisblop
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cunning idea,really,this gives you so mucch freedom,a story in a story.I am looking foreward to this immensly.Mad great idea.Sasuke is so responsive to Naruto,very erotic.
person minjin00
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh what a cliffhanger you have there.the story's so interesting that i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter.