Reviews for Make My Heart Do Flips - Naruto

person AkumaKawa

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Wow. So who is the other male? What about Sakura's role? What about who wrote it?

Keep up the great work, Coolsa.

person Sukara

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

W00t!!! =O Keep up teh good ne? ^=^

person tsusami

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

hahahahaha. I could have predicted the play part, but naruto's reaction was awesome! Cute story. I look forward to more. :)

person MultifacetedTune

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Yayness!!! You updated!!! ^___^ This is getting to be very interesting...not to mention promising, lol. I can't wait to find out if I'm right about who the "third lover" in this love triangle is........ ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!

person silverfox

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

man this story is great i really liked this chapter poor sasuke oh well keep up the good work and update soon

person Sasuke Fangirl #343

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

It seems like a very interesting plot line...Can't wait for more! ^_~

person vampchic

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Hehe, very cute! I thought the triangle was going to have at least one girl in it. But ah, you just made it better.^^ I wounder who the third person will be? I'm kind of suspecting that it'll be Neji. Am I right?? Update soon, kay? I really want to read more of the absolutely cute fic!
And I think that your writing is perfectly fine. All of us authors have mistakes in our works too! So don't worry too much over it. XP Now hurry up and write the next chapter!

person Heather

schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

i almost didn't read this because it was iruka/naruto (because that just somehow seems really, really wrong), but i decided to give it a chance. and i think that so far it's started off very nicely. and don't worry about any grammatical errors. just keep on writing, and don't let it bother you. and i'm really hoping that this will be sasunaru. i absolutely love, love that pairing! i'm like you...awhile ago i got curious about the whole yaoi thing. i decided to give it a shot, and a sasunaru fic was one of the first ones i read. and it was hot!!! after that, i was completely hooked. very rarely do i read m/f stories now. so, because i'm biased, if this story has some hot sasunaru action, i'd think it'd be even better! but anyways...i hope you update soon. i wanna see naruto and sasuke act out that kiss!

person Hitomi No Ryu

schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Awww...I never read a fic with a onesided IruNaru before!! Hope it turns out well!! UPDATE SOON!!

person Germaine(2lazy 2 sign in)

schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Okay....this is really confusing...cause at first I thought this was a NaruIruk (which I'm not very found of since they act like they are brothers...and I HATE incest)... But then I started thinking "hey, this might be a SasuNaruSasu"...but I dunno...I love SasuNaru though...and I almost got convinced when I looked in your profile and saw that you had "Chasing Naruto" as one of your favorites...(and I LOVE that fanfic! xD) But then again you had like two SasuSaku (*barf*) as your favorites too...=S

But then....when I actually read the summary I found out that it was NaruIruk NaruSasu...damn...please...stick to SasuNar instead...Iruka is like...10 years older than Naruto...he can have Kakashi instead..^^..and Iruka is more like a big brother (or even a mother...since he's kinda....over protective) to Naruto....I dunno, in my head that seams so wrong....

You do whatever you want...but I would like to know if I should continue reading this or not...

Hugs n'love

~Germaine~

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