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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nyuu... plz don't tell moi there's gonna be an IruNaru kiss! >< that's gross! but then again it's up to u, don't let my opinion influence u :)
great story!
ja ne!
great story!
ja ne!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00T!!! Great fic. =3 Please continue! And Naruto ish aonly a lil outta charater. xD He's not the one who buys ramen, he gets other people to buy. xD He begs and such. xD So funny. xD
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaah, your first yaoi. *sniff* brings back memories (lol)
Anywho, I really really like this. You're developing the story and the characters really well so far, they don't seem to be too OOC, though it's still early to tell, so I won't pass my judgement yet. I'll definitely be keeping my eye out for more. :D
Anywho, I really really like this. You're developing the story and the characters really well so far, they don't seem to be too OOC, though it's still early to tell, so I won't pass my judgement yet. I'll definitely be keeping my eye out for more. :D
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, so is this a SasuNaru fic or a NaruIru fic? NaruIru isn't really that common. That could be interesting. So far I think this is cute and you should continue. I would like to know where you plan on taking this. Exactly how old is everyone? Are they in highschool? And how long has it been sense Naruto and Sasuke last seen each other? Cant wait to see just what type of play it is that the two of them has gotten themselves into.^^ Yup, want to read more. Update soon, kay?
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good so far. well written. i'm not sure where it's supposed to be going yet but i'll certainly keep reading. so...onward!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Keep up the great work. Got some grammer mistakes, but love it.
Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a great idea!!! I love it!!! *gives you chocolates* Those are to thank you for a job well done and to give you modivation to write another chapter!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slight grammatical errors, but otherwise, very cute. Looking forward to reading the next chapter, definitely. lol I don't like sasuke being a bastard (since I just plain hate sasuke), nonetheless, he is one already :P Can't do much, ne. So, have him put more venom in his speech, thoughts, and actions. He is a bastard and will never change until he realizes the true love that Naruto has for him *sigh* Naruto just HAD to love someone like Sasuke in the end eh. Twisted lol. Keep writing.