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update pleeeeeeeeeeez!!!!!!!

This is AWESOME! You did such a good job of writing it.

-Mist

Uh oh. What's going to happen next? Poor Naruto. I feel for him. Oh well.
I really like your story, and your writing style. I laughed my ass off in the first chapters, but now I'm pretty much panicking over poor Naruto. (Take it easy, it's a good kind of panic). I'm really excited to hear what gender the baby's going to be. I liked that you kept it a secret. Just gives me more to wonder about. *sits in corner and wonders*
It went a little fast in the beginning, but in the later chapters, uh... (How to say this?) There was more...control, if you can say it that way. Anyway, I think you are a good writer. Keep the great work up! (And please update soon, I can't stand Naruto being captured by Orochimaru!)
MiniMew

This story is GREAT! I love the plot and the devotion Sasuke shows for Naruto! Keep up the good writing!!

*twitches and falls over* AHH! Stoping is bad. Stoping when poor little Naru and his baby are in the hands of the evil snake man is even worse! --; Man he angers me. xD But is pretty. *snickers* I love your openings to all the chapters...PLEASE don't stop! Anywhere! Ever! You shoukd write ALL the fics! ^^ Because you are really good at it. eh, must go...the people in MY closet are trying to get out ^^ Hehe. Grandest work!
~Mally~

Not a review but i'll be sure to write one for the story. i love M-pregs. really i do. anyway, you can be my beta. e-mail me sometime and i'll tell you why i have so many grammerish problems...okay i'll tell you now. my computer is screwed up and i have to write it like that or it'll put that red squiglly line under it saying it's wrong, so i had to write it like that and i know Henyou is Hanyou, i just like spelling it Henyou. i'm not a doofus like some people think. anyway i would love for you to be my beta, please and thank you. BTW what did you think about the Dumbledore part? and who do you think should kill the evil you-know-who? i say it should be inuyasha not harry, cause you know Inuyasha trying to protect Harry ends up killing You-know-who...my e-mail should be on it if it's not here it is

Rurouni_inuchan@hotmail.com. E-mail me sometime so we can chat and shit. byes for now.

Great story so far! i love it! i can't wait till sasuke finds naruto! please update asap!

OMG! (tears streaming down cheeks) That's so sad!! ...And yes, that last line was precious. It must be so devastating for Sasu-chan and Naru-chan. I'd be raging mad if someone tried to take MY baby!! It must suck so bad to not be able to do anything but either sit and wait to be saved or wait until someone takes your baby away. (sigh)
You may have people in you closet, but mine are under my bed. 'S quite spacious under there, actually.
inuyasha: speak for yourself. T.T
kisame: I kinda like it...
ichigo: I'm bored. Let's have another break-dancing competition.
lee: OR TWISTER!!
Yah, I blame them for my lack of sleep -X.x- UPDATE SOON!!

Do u like torturing people? your doing a good job....

I need more story

LOL! I loved the whole convo between you and Orochimaru in the beginning. Very funny!

I love this story ^.^ And I loved the fact that you borrowed that idea from Harry Potter(Ima HUGE fan of HP). I liked the ending of this chapter. It was very sweet, just cause Sasuke will come for Naruto.