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for Oh Baby!

by koolanimefreek

person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW I LIKE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON

thanks
person Sephykoi
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGGG!! *dies* I just read this all in one go, and MAN was it great!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! This is freakin' hilarious, and it SO reminds me of my cousin right now, who is pregnant. AHAHAHAHA!

~the Seph
person luthorlover
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is awesome! I just read all 8 parts in one sitting and I need more!!!XD
*pwease?*
*gives puppy-dog eyes*

xoxo,
Monica ^__^
person Choister
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like! Hehe, I wish there was more about cravings and stuff though.
person Kiki
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I only started reading this story because it's a mpreg and the title. n.n; I have a story on FF.net that's mpreg with the same title. Course that one is HP related..but still. That was enough of a coincidence to get me to read this. I'm glad I did ya know. n.n I feel so bad for Sasuke. Naruto's moodswings are a real bitch..! Ive been thinking about doing a Preg!Naruto type story. But now I'll need to think up a new title. :P XD
person Masago
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is positively lovely~Hehe. I love this story, it is so c ute to read. ^_^~Can't wait to see an update. :)
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story ! wobbling Naruto is so cute !!!

For the challenge, it cool but I suck at writing... too sad T-T

Please update soon !!!
person bookworm51485
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! New chapter!!!! And now Orochimaru kidnaps Naruto, holds him captive til babies are born, Kabuto delivers them and then tries to take them away but Sasuke comes and then Naruto gets a burst of strength due to parental love and they both kick Oro and Kabuto's asses. I was thinking about participating in the challenge but I spent awhile thinking about it and I couldn't think of anything to write, plus I kind of suck at writing. Anyways good luck with that and I'm sure there's another person reading who can actually write and will take you up on the challenge. Oh and btw you have August 8th and 10th written instead of September, don't know but some people might ignore the challenge because they think the date already passed. Anyways good job and I can't wait til the next chapter.
person Emily Saeke
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the longer chapter, much love and I can't wait for more. O.o So hard to follow with my favorite fics....there are so many. Well Anyways I'm still loving this one and I can't wait until they have their baby and I really wanna se what Orochimaru's up to as well. Hurry with that Chappy okies? Love ya!
person Celen
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're going to continue this soon, aren't you? ^^ Please?