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for Oh Baby!

by koolanimefreek

schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i like the story it's funny and interesting to read. please up date soon!!!
person Demon
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have to update soon this is amazing!!!!!!
person Sisco
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeak! So awesome! I don't know why, but I crave Mpreg stroies! Oh, I know why. XD It's amusing to see a male with female horomones. LOL!!! Poor Sasuke. I bet he's just about to throw a fit...or worse...go Itachi, and then he wouldn't have an heir! Oo; Scarey thought!

Personally, I hope it's a boy! XDD I always hope it's a boy. 9.9 *shrugs* I'm a freak!
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... Sasuke finds out what all father's to be do...Pregnant women are highly dangerous and DEADLY...

So what is ole Orochimaru and Kabuto going to do? What about their obsessions with Sasuke and Naruto, respectively?

Love this, keep up the excellent work, coolsa.
person Diayma
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic so far and I eagerly await the next update.

As to the co-writer issue...i'm not really that good at fighting scenes (IMHO anyway. I've been told different) but if you're still looking for one, I wouldn't mind. I'm 19 and i've been told i'm pretty creative at times. Now, before I go off on weird and various tangents, I will restate that I love your fic and I can't wait for you to update.
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!! Need more SasuNaru goodness! Very cute and funny fic! I laughed the whole time! Wait...Orochimaru is coming!!!

~Akira~
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well with naruto being 5 months I wouldn't suggest a lemon yet but after birth I help you out then lol. Besides I love the fluff right now It's sooooooooooo cute
POP lmao well update soon

loves Arry
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto who get of Sasuke nerves ! Soo cool !!! ^_^

I love when Sasuke get the torture !
Now it's Dobe and Depressed Sasuke !!

But like he said just 4 months more *smirk*
hope that will long... =^_^=


Please update soon !!!
person Jadejj
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So the snake knows about the baby what about Itachi does he know yet :P good chapter
person NNCS
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!