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Thank God for aff.net. I just switched over to here from ff.net cause the stupid site wouldn't let me see the chapter, it just kept showing the author's note. I like this new chapter, very happy to see an update and I can't wait for the next one. Is Orochimaru going to try to get Naruto while he's pregnant or is he going to try to take the baby after it's born, at least I'm assuming that would be his goal considering the baby would probably have the sharingan and some of the power of the kyuubi. I read another mpreg fanfic and they had Oro come and steal the kids after they were born but somehow it would make more sense to me if he stole Naruto when he was close to delivering, then delivered the baby and tries to kill Naruto but Sasuke comes and saves them all and brings Naruto and the baby home. But then Itachi/Akatsuki comes and steals Naruto again but Sasuke comes after him and they both kick Akatsuki ass and then they go back home to their baby and live happily ever after:). But that's just my idea.

I would love to be your cowriter but I'm really not that creative, I have spurts of creativity but they come really far apart and I'm really not that good of a writer. I wish though. Anyways that's all from me, good job and update soon.

*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeeee!!! XDDDDDDD

I loved this chappie it was nice and fluffy bu you said the lemon will come so I shall wait.
I know how it is ith re formating Tada it is tedious and painful so update when you can kay

Loves Arry

This is realy good so far. I like the explination on how Naruto got pregnant. It's really creative! Good luck with your computer! I know how it feels to have to re-format a fanfiction.... I had to re-format 68 MS Word pages worth of one.... @__@''
I look forward to seeing more of the story!
~Dark

wow that was great! i love the way you write!! keep up the good work!!

It's a very good story ! ^-^

Sasuke is really a ... DOBE !!!! calling Naruto fat !


Please update soon !

great

Oh, gods!!! That was soooooo cute!!! ^___^ And the ending was great!!! *lmao* Very well done -- keep up the good work!!!

lol cute ficcie here !!

I love naruto mpreg's fics, and with Naruto's normal charactere now in mood swing, Oh the joy *muahahahaha*

Man!!!!!
I want so much more!!! Gimme another chapter pleaseeeee!
So fluffy *____* so kawaiiii!
I just can't waiting for the next. ^^
And your english is so much better than mine ^^*