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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^0^ I love it!! The detail and the way you write just caught my attention -especially since this is a sasunaru pairing story! I hope you write more different stories soon!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good is there saposed to be more i'd apreciate it if it was
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA!!! Make Sasuke lose Naruto...he deserves it ^_^;;...hehheh...anyway...Naruto deserves better than him...update soon???
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good and all, but I think you've rushed the events, and it COULD use a little more detail.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! and i mean WOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! OO
I luv this story!!!
I luv this story!!!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was heavy.To see Sasuke lose it like that seemed very believable.He is far beyond the grasp of reason somehow I feel and this story reflected that.It also seemed the emotions expressed were boyish (except for Sasuke modifying his understanding of his feelings of love/lust/connection which was very well done of him) violent ,they had been hidden and even the place he expressed them seemed significant,very realistic responces.Sorry I am not expressing this well but I am sure you get the drift.I thought this chapter was well done and was not disapointing at all compared the the first chapter which was dreamy hot,it just gripped me.There is something in your voice or take on Sasuke that is fresh,I admire that and when I figure out what it is I will let you know.Oh this chapter was hot,steaming hot.Thank you very much.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was a very sad chapter. Both boys seem to be in anguish. I hope your story has a happy ending. W
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was a very sad chapter. Both boys seem to be in anguish. I hope your story has a happy ending. What can I say, I'm a sap for happy endings. This chapter brings a lot of questions to mind about naruto. Maybe you should have the next chapter in Naruto's POV. As always I wish you the best of luck and hope that you update soon and keep me posted.
~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~
~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking this so far so keep up the good work
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.............wow. Umm...I wasn't...uhh...expecting that...at all...and...ummm........yeah. ^^ But I really, really liked this -- very well done, with excellent descriptions. I'm quite interested in finding out how it ends/what happens next, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Ja ne!!!