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for Juxtaposition

by Tremalkinger

person ^^
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay TWO chapters! sooo happy. i came to check and i was like OMG OMG yay yay! she/he wrote two chapters! hehe so now i'm gunna go enjoy ch. 4. goodness this is so exciting! -__-" i'm just so glad SOME people actually UPDATE. *glares at nonupdaters* anyways, great chapter!
person ^^
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok first things first! i've been thinking about this story, and the summary. you said it's sorta sasunaru in body, but not mind. will that change? i mean i really like this story, but i'm afraid that it might turn out to be a sasusaku...i can't STAND sakura and sasuke together, the only girl i could picture with sasuke is hinata...because she's the only girl who doesn't fan after him. but are you gonna like put naruto back into his body and then have sasuke and naruto be together? please please tell me you're gonna do that! i don't wanna get into the story only to then realize it's a sasusaku, because as i was reading ch. 4, it reaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllly felt like i was reading a sasusaku. anyways please clarify to me if it'll turn out to be REALLY be sasunaru. *crosses fingers and hopes it is*
person DeadUchiha!
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm feeling a bit silly right now, heh. Anyways i liked these two chappys! things are getting really really good! I can't wait to see more! *gripes about not getting that email you said you would give me...* LOL... well i didn't miss the update so i am content! hoorah! The part with Saku and Sasu in the grass was very entertaining! YAY! Complications! WooHoo! crap i better quit babbling now... Never mind my crappy spelling...if there is some...I'm kind of doing like three things at once...
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! *GLOMPS!* d(^-^)b
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!!! I had typed something else and then i acidentilly deleted it! CRAP! oh well, i basically just said that i hope you don't let peoples taste for a particular pairing to sway what you have planned for this fic because i think which ever way you decide to take it, i will be just as good. Pairings piss me off. People can be so snobbish about them sometimes...sigh...i really do love this story. Even though i really like NaruSasu (((actually i like it more than any others!! yay!)))or whatever, i think it would work out just as well with NaruSaku or SasuSaku...or all three...or none at all! Sigh...why does it always have to be about the pairings?!?...*grumbl grumble* Sorry, i just read a couple of comments on your review page and it sounded to me like people were threatening to quit reading if you didn't give then the SasuNaru-ness, and i became sad. Sigh...so yeah! Keep the story coming! I can't wait to read more...and don't worry about the slower parts, like chappy three, those parts are necessary for building the story, and i actually liked that chapter! Would have even liked a bit more of the "At sakura's house" stuff...heh... Alright. I'm done now! Keep up the awesome work! d(^-^)b
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! This is so awesome <3

You -must- continue soon! ^_^
person Sasuke
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Definitely well-written. And I have to say this is one of the first I have deigned to read involving Sakura with Sasuke in some manner. Considering how much I despise the girl, quite a feat. Although I can't help but worry that you're gonna suddenly turn Sasuke hetero by the end of it >>. The horror...
person blisblop
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really f'g gripping story.You took me by total surprise.It's intense and not easy to pre judge,I know that sounds awkward but I can not think of the word I want.I am really turned on by this situation between Sasuke and Sakura.it took me by surprise.Well done.Really looking forward to the next chapter of this.Thanks!
person noise
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Just wow.... This story is really good! And that last chapter...just...wow.
why can't Naruto see?!?!
person noise
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Just wow.... This story is really good! And that last chapter...just...wow.
why can't Naruto see?!?!
person angel of darkness
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao you should have naruto walk in on them kissin or somethin and screw it all up like he tends to do -giggles-