AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Juxtaposition

by Tremalkinger

person ochiba
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
simply amazing last chapter! i'm so loving the way you portray both Sakura and Sasuke... i hope that the real Naruto gives Sasuke a chance (;_;)
person Tsuki Ame
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah...exquisite chapter, divine!!! I'm so in love with your plot, that I shall keep coming back to check and see for new updates. Speaking of which...may we have another update? *pouts* please?
person Ly
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nah, I really hope that Sasuke won't fall in love with Sakura instead ._.
Rally interesting story, you have a good writing style.
I really hope it'll turn out to be a sasunaru fanfic ^^'
person shuchan
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i only want to say 2 things:
1)get naruto back to his own body,
and
2)do the lemon from there
sakura's a nice gal and all, but she and sasuke are as bad of a pairing as Kai and Takao (beyblade), which is like a mix of oil and water. they. do. not. mix.
other wise, well written!
person weeeeeeeee
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaw i wanted 2 read more. i feel bad 4 sasuke x( n the real naruto o.O they're kinda bein played around by sakura's emotions. she realli needs 2 qet em unda control. xD hope u upd8 soon xD
person empyreal
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far, I like it. The difficulty in both Naruto and Sakura in adjusting to each other's positions.. their different relationships with Sasuke, it's all well-written. In-character. And I like how confused Sakura is on how two guys would go at it, very amusing. Makes you wonder what'll happen when the month is over. Maybe a threesome? Look forward to more!
person ky0kichi
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Update! UPDATE UPDATE
person phoenix
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo interesting! they are having a hard time! do update!
person twira
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! GOD! I love this story...and the writing! I can't wait for the next chapter....I REALLY CAN'T...
*bribes with cookies* Write. WRITE!

so much love!
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, this is gonna be great. Although Sakura is evil for thinking about decieving Sasuke..That's mean D: What will happen if she does that and they switch back? It's gonna suxx0r :((

Update soon!