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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tears in eyes*
This is wonderful.
I love you.
Please write the next chapter before I explode.
This is wonderful.
I love you.
Please write the next chapter before I explode.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good, and I had a great time reading the chapter. I think you've done well in capturing the essence of each of the characters, and your writing is very good. This may not be where your story is headed, but it seems like a perfect set up for a sasusakunaru triangle (I noticed someone put up a challenge for one not too long ago). I feel really bad for sasuke, who I assume will get tricked into thinking that naruto actually has feelings for him. I hope the next chapter comes out soon :) and keep up the good work!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...God. This is GREAT!!! keep it coming!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this won't turn out to be a SakuSasu story, because Sakura is in Naruto's body... and I don't think it would be fair for Sakura to use the advantage of being in Naruto's body... maybe she finds out more of how Sasuke feels for Naruto, and tells Naruto, but doesn't do anything until they switch back? Because ... *laughs* It's an intresting idea for certain, but I'm rather.. meh about Sakura/Sasuke anything... XD
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm getting a really big kick out of this! I think if you make Sakura go after Sasuke though, at least warn poor Naruto so he's not wondering what the hell's going on later. :) 'Why are you in my bed Sasuke?!' hehehe I am really looking forward to more of this one. Yeah!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMGOGMGOGMOGMGOMGMOGMOGMGOGMOMGMOG! i FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! HAHAAHAHHA. omg is sakura gonna take advantage of being in Naruto's body? and will Sasuke find out. OMG i can't wait, please update soon! UEEEIIEEE! i love this story. kukuku. ooh what is gonna happen to naruto. MWAHAHA! and i can't wait to see what Sasuke will do if/when he finds out! mwahhaa
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This better not be all there is because I haven't read a fic that made me want to see what happens next THIS MUCH in a very very long time!!! This is awesome! You are really really good! The relationships between the characters are perfect! BANG ON! YAY! So excellent! I mean, it would work great as a one shot too, but i think a lot of people would be very disappointed if it ended here. Again *HI FIVE!* YAY! I can't wait for more. Actually, if it wouldn't trouble you too much, you could email me if you update. I would like that very much. I would hate to miss it! *GAAAA!* *super glomps!*
also, i know from experience how "weird" it is to write "body switched" characters and the like... the descriptions of things being coherent and all... you did it very well! *Happy clapping* and you've got a whole MONTH of wonderful misadventure to work with! HOLY CRAP! I JUST WANNA GOBBLE UP MORE!!! Heh.
Well I could go on and on but you might think I’m weird. so...Hahaha! *is waiting impatiently for more yummy fiction*
LATER THEN! TYPE MORE!
d(^-^)b
P.S. Beware: I am now your fan *wink*
also, i know from experience how "weird" it is to write "body switched" characters and the like... the descriptions of things being coherent and all... you did it very well! *Happy clapping* and you've got a whole MONTH of wonderful misadventure to work with! HOLY CRAP! I JUST WANNA GOBBLE UP MORE!!! Heh.
Well I could go on and on but you might think I’m weird. so...Hahaha! *is waiting impatiently for more yummy fiction*
LATER THEN! TYPE MORE!
d(^-^)b
P.S. Beware: I am now your fan *wink*
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap and YAY! Ever so cool! I love this. Your interactions are great! And damn it! Sakura is great too! Perfect! Well done! *Clapping for you* I'm am thoroughly enjoying Naruto and Sakura! the conversation had me chuckling happily! Again YAY! I did notice what i thought might be a typo:
"He can't even think of females romantically, yet he let (HER?) waste away all these years, wanting the impossible."
And another thing at the end...i forget what it said exactly, but, i think there is a missing word...it was where you talked about "how they would view it"...anyway, yeah...one sentance read funny to me, but that was it, otherwise this chapter was PERFECT! And hoora! now i feel silly for what i said in my email to you because you have answered my question already...that's what i get for being hastey i guess! Well shit! I hpe to goodness you have more of this story already written...or at least can plot and type with the speed of Konoha's Yellow Flash, because i seriously want like 10 to 15 more chapters of this like IMMEDIATELY! LOL... Good luck with that! Keep it coming, and i will keep with the enjoying! okay then i'm done now! *GLOMPS* d(^-^)b
Oh yeah...i wanna see what Sakura THINKS of her new 'body' and how it will affect her 'feelings' about its owner...*wiggles eyebrows* ...heh...don't worry...I'm not suggesting anything special, but she has to AT LEAST pause and take notice of how absolutly fucking HOT "she" is now, doesn't she? *evil grin*
"He can't even think of females romantically, yet he let (HER?) waste away all these years, wanting the impossible."
And another thing at the end...i forget what it said exactly, but, i think there is a missing word...it was where you talked about "how they would view it"...anyway, yeah...one sentance read funny to me, but that was it, otherwise this chapter was PERFECT! And hoora! now i feel silly for what i said in my email to you because you have answered my question already...that's what i get for being hastey i guess! Well shit! I hpe to goodness you have more of this story already written...or at least can plot and type with the speed of Konoha's Yellow Flash, because i seriously want like 10 to 15 more chapters of this like IMMEDIATELY! LOL... Good luck with that! Keep it coming, and i will keep with the enjoying! okay then i'm done now! *GLOMPS* d(^-^)b
Oh yeah...i wanna see what Sakura THINKS of her new 'body' and how it will affect her 'feelings' about its owner...*wiggles eyebrows* ...heh...don't worry...I'm not suggesting anything special, but she has to AT LEAST pause and take notice of how absolutly fucking HOT "she" is now, doesn't she? *evil grin*
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wow, an update already? I was hardly able to believe it. Well done, another great chapter!! I love the interaction between Sakura/Naruto, you play them so well. Heh, when I'm watching the anime, sometimes I tend to...skip part of her Sasuke this and Sasuke that drabble. I love Sakura dearly too, she's actually a favorite character, and I love your way of playing her. You're not bashing her, and you've her a great role in realizing that perhaps Sasuke prefers salt to sugar ^_~. Keep going, I'm anxious for another update!!
And yes, twists. Because behind every great story is a unique author who is rubbing their hands together in malicious glee with plot twists dancing round their heads... ^_^
And yes, twists. Because behind every great story is a unique author who is rubbing their hands together in malicious glee with plot twists dancing round their heads... ^_^
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you insensitive ******!!! change them back!!! sasuke has to be with NARUTO, be it body or mind!!! (in this case, put naru back in his body and get them moving!!!)