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by Tremalkinger

person ^_^;
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One random thing; If Naruto were Yondaime's son himself and the whole of Konoha knew, then that would inevitably change their perceptive of him, ne? He wouldn't be so hated anymore and it wouldn't be Naruto that way anymore.... Unless, of course, you have a plot-explanation up your sleeve that you'll include next chapter =D!

....Sakura should stop angsting about not being part of a prestigious clan etcetera, etcetera. It's very unbecoming. :O

person Tsuki Ame
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::claps:: my hat's off to you, this is an excellent start to a great plotline. I've read some body-switching stories, but I must confess they weren't as interesting as yours. They had the normal Sakura bashing and whatnot, and perhaps a smidgen of a storyline. I am greatly interested in your plot here, I think it's a strong beginning and I have to love the understanding between Naruto/Sakura when they are in each other's bodies. They are trained shinbo, freaking out when being switched is not really plausible, is it? I applaud Sasuke's character, it's magnificentally himself and terrifically played. I hope to see an update soon, this story could twist in some unexpected ways, ne? ^_~
person Tsuki Ame
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ignore shuchan's review, he/she obviously doesn't know what they're talking about. You've put warnings up and you've told the essence of your story, so why would someone still click on it and read it and then leave such an obnoxious review? Reviewers these days...what happened to the nice, helpful reviews we used to get? I tell ya...I feel old...and I'm still in me tweens!!!
person ^^
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tehee it's me again. teehee. i'm reviewing before i even READ it. hehe. i love you so much! you've got the second chapter up! i was only bookmarking the story and then i noticed that a chapter 2 was up. *smooch* thank you so MUCH! i'm off to read it now. mehhe. and if i can, then i'll review the chapter for the chapter. hahaa! i just hope aff will let me review a chapter two times...cuz apparently ff.net doesnt. ^^ well anyways, thanks for updating!
person ^^
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ehehehe! i'm reviewing once again! mwhahah. O M G! i LOVED this chapter. omg sakura really is gonna take advantage of naruto's body isn't she??!! OMG ew! it's like she's masturbating...but not. HAHAHAHA. i mean like it's not her body but haha. it's so much fun reading this story!!! MWAHAHA! i can't WAIT until sasuke comes in!!! mehehe. update again update again! *bounces around like a hyper puppy* i'm waiting for your update. ^^