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Oh! But no angsty, romanticly estranged-like complications. More like:

Naruto: Ugh, harder, Sasuke! Faster!
Sasuke: Oohhh.... *Panting and Stuff*
Naruto: AHHHH
Sasuke: AHHHH
KNOCK KNOCK
Sasuke's Mom: Honey, are you alright? I'm coming in...

Yeah, that kind of humourous, nonemotional complication.
^_____________^ (Thinking obscene thoughts)

OK MY REQUEST;ahem, Sasuke is seperated from Naruto,maybe Naruto ends up hiding in a room,Sasuke comes in,looking for a shirt to change into but low and behold its Itachi's room,Itachi verbaly spars with Sasuke and comes on to him(having already noticed Naruto is gloming(observing closely) Sasuke big time from his hiding place in the room,Itachi gets closer,dazing out Sasuke, goes in for a kiss and whispers that Naruto is watching,like he wants to help him imobilize Naruto with a show,Sasuke half bombed with lust and frustration and Itachiness and Naruto's nonsence goes for it (maybe Itachi caught Sasuke in a blind fold with his shirt...nah,maybe)they dance...teasing one another ,shirt off Itachi,and after general verbal teasing ,where oh where is your girl friend yadda,yadda,blackmail,I know your girlfriend is a guy..dialogue .Sasuke plays along,just cause he wants to teach Naruto a lesson .coughrightcough.Itachi pins him right where Naruto can see everything cause he is hidden at hip level Itachi gets Sasukes pants around his knees and is grinding him into the wall?desk?velvet chair? custom spanking bench that just so happens to be there? his pants undone to his hips(another joy of silk underwear bit commences) and torments him unto.... now does Naruto "save" Sasuke interupting and getting dragged in or does Itachi help Sasuke catch Naruto who is in a daze,drooling?... .before they break many more legal/social customs... then proceed to do so with Naruto absorbed into the mix?Do both of them torment Naruto(though Itachi is more using Sasuke's body to make him torment Naruto, who is in"I got brothers on me " paradise ,two, para-dice (pair of dice,get it....OK, it was a biker gang in T.O.years ago ,I am using them,my mind enjoys sullying bikers with yoai,heh heh hehha ha...oh..anyway..) Yeah ,Itachi is helping Sasuke by molesting him into Naruto who is sure he is seeing ,feeling things he will never have the chance to again...now does Itachi have to leave?Do they all get interupted?Point being the brothers will never get to do this again either, cause they would never be in a situation where they can deny what they are doing,I want them excited and caught up in it too,they can blame it on Naruto and go into denial later.Naruto can (not must) decide Sasuke must be removed from his family,um,Itachi,... before they all get into something further, he for one is not ready for..this is just before the end of this arc,do not want much thinking going on but all the denial/thought,Naruto removing Sasuke , goes on *after *the sexual contact (even if its just non intercourse,I'd like Sasuke getting faced with Naruto with Itachi behind him and getting his postate finger fucked by his brother, how or whether the others get any,the others could get started on hand jobs... or Itachi can grind Sasuke into Naruto without Naruto ever knowing about what Itachi's fingers are up to or....So Itachi starts it,Sasuke thinks its a good idea but he gets utterly turned on (exhibitionist as we all know )and forgets himself and Naruto has no mistakes in his mind after seeing/experiancing them what his preferance is ...Uchiha's! This way there is no evil Itachi,just yoai succulant goodness.Yup,thats my WISH!!! Beams,whadda ya think?Oh this can be at party yeah

wahhh(.-_-.) im crying here i so wanted more neji/naruto its so good but all it is,is sasuke-teme. its not fair. i dont want naruto to end up with that evil, mean, traiter. i really want neji/naruto or gaara/naruto even itcha would be better although his name sounds like he has a really bad scatch.
so my request is please put more neji/naruto in i hope u update soon because i do like the fic. as to what narutos going to do at the party hes going to flirt with all the guys but sasuke-teme

OMFGWTFBBQ!!!! >=O This fic is fricken smexxi!!!! Update soon!!!! <333333333 -Adds to favorites-

.....I'm FEMALE...I'm not supposed to nose bleed...and yet you have broken my laws of reality, or in other words, that was a kick ass lemon.As for who should win Naruto, our very own kinky-ice bitch should win, 'cause they're polar opposites of eachother ('tis the hot~ness) and Sasuke just gets him into the most delisious scenarios( thankys to the writer, of course!~^,^~).
Naruto is ta' cute kinky sex kitten and Sasuke is the hot sadist, You-know-you-want-me-but-I'll-always-have-my-way-and-I-don't-want-you-cause-I'm-just-that-sexy bitch.Perfect coulpe!!1!!!(And besides, how can naruto not want more Sasuke lovin's and blowjobs from the hot bastard? We all know he enjoyed that blowjob, AND he even said that he didn't feel upset from the kiss like he thought he should have!
.......*pervert grin that could make Kakashi AND Jiraiya hide in fear and unnervement*...........
KEEP IT GOIN'!!!!!WE LOVE YOU FOR IT!!!(plus, you fit it all into a lovely plot, thankyou very much!)

And also, I wouldn't mind seeing some naru/gar(in any order) action, but in the end, Sasuke and Naruto belong together.(In my PERSONAL opinion. That is something that's debatable.)

Very nice story, it had so many parts that cracked me up completely! Can't we please, please have a little bit of NejiNaru (or NaruNeji - I'm not fussy XD)? You make Neji sound so damn appealing... maybe Naruto feels that way too? *puppy dog eyes* PWEASE???

I wonder who Naruto's new roommate going to be? Let's see...whoever he is, if he's going to get some love interests towards Naruto...he has to be like Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara. Cold, collective, lacking in good social skills, and a hottie to boot...*gasp*...I BET ITS KIMIMARO!! (What? He's a hottie to me...)

LMFAO BEST SCENE EVER please continue

I love it so far, especially that scene with naruto and gaara as shusaku and kyuubi, naruto is really cute and i like that you wrote him with more confidence rather than the customary hyperactive/too loud kid everybody picks on. your naruto doesn't seem to take any B.S. from anyone and that's probably alot better than someone defining themselves by what others see in them only. please update soon -lala