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Totally awsome, but I was hoping for more seduction verses full on sexual encounter. More sensual torture for Naruto or more of a fight from Naruto but hey its all good to me.

I hope there will be a next chapter very soon.

That last line about Sasuke having wanted ti be a fireman... I thought the exact same thing the first you mentioned it! XD My mind really is on permanent gutter mode. Heh heh. As for suggestions, I want to see a nice, hard fuck scene. I've been reading a ton of fanfiction lately (before green light season starts), but no one's doing any lemons of whatever. Just mostly... plot. Eww. Hehe, I also want to see Jiraiya blackmail Naruto or something. It'd fit in perfectly in this story. ^__^

Oh ho ho ho...

I WANT NARUTO AND GAARA ACTION! GIMME!.....please.....for the next chapter..... but everything is good! love the new chapter! ^_^

OMFG! That was so hot! And unexpected, too :)
I love, LOVE!! the "jealous&possessive Sasuke", the best part for me is when he has Naruto for himself yet he realises, that he has great competition and get really possessive, just like in the shop, oh, just sweeet. It's like "you can look at Naruto but don't you dare touch him!!He's mine, MINE! Wrrah!!" XD
Oh, and there were so many really hilarious parts!!! I laughed my head off when Naruto stole Chouji's food!! I'm still laughing, actually XD !!
Update ASAP!!!!

I love it when people chase after Naruto. He's so confused and that's really adorable to me. Plus, Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara are EXTRA sexy. It really wouldn't bother me if all three of them snagged him. His ego is so cute too, and definiotely not annoying because even though it's inflated, he's still got that Naruto charm. Please update soon. Ooh, I'm hoping there will be a little jealousy among the boys.

Super good! Poor Naruto! He's always getting molested in these stories! I woudl like to see him molest someone and make them uncomfortable. Maybe he could give Sasuke a taste of his own medicine!

well, i want sasuke to bang naruto. good. bu ti guess i'll hafta see that in the next chapter, he? so ON WITH IT!!! i really wanna read!

I just read this fic for the first time and finished it all the way through (or as much as u have done) and I must say, I want more! More Gaara/Naru! More Naru/Neji! I just love a jealous and angry Sasuke. Haha. When I first looked at this, I wasn't sure i'd like the 1st person narrative thing, most people really screw it up when they try, but you are amazing. I adore this fic. Thanks for writing this! Yay, you made my night, I've been looking for a well written story that has some Gaara action in it. Keep going.

I really like this fic, I am a sucker for modern AU fics with Sas/Nar pairings. I don't think I want Nar to wear a dress, but it would be good for Sas to play with him under the table at the party, or maybe corner him somewhere that they could get caught. Don't let Nar get to uptight about his change in preferences, he was meant to be with Sasuke. Waiting patiently, and I loved scene with Gaara.

...........................NOT FAIR . you give both gaara and sasuke-bastard good parts with naruto but poor neji X(. YOu must give a good hot and steamy part between naruto and neji where they can jump there bones XD and dont make it one sided.AT the party I supose Itachi will be there and he'll be all over naruto that would be good and sasuke-bastard will get up set. Just a thought since this is a party you'll need other guest so you could have neji and garra go for some reason,you could also though in orochimaru kabuto and kisame just for fun.
for this fanfiction the pairing i want is
naruto/neji
naruto/gaara
update soon looking foward to it