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by NexusW

person AlPoptart
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! OMG WOW! I honestly have not read any Naruto story as good as this. Might I add your writing is awsome. Your very detailed. I love the whole thing. I regularly do not review any stories. I only review when I find something I like. If you have MSN then email me. You dont seem like the type to be one of those fanatic, horny, obsessive preteens. It would be cool to talk to you.
person Darkness-Consumer
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, brilliant story! :P I couldn't stop laughing at some parts, it was so funny! I can't wait for your next update :)
person iie
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, i'm going to freakin' die of laughter!!!!!!! Ahh this story's great, so good, original, funny, and kinky. Yay for everyone hitting on naruto. Btw, loved the neji-is-a-herbal-essence-godly-icon-and-has-a-orgasm-inducing-voice! Your fic is great entertainment and pure genius! I'm really looking forward to what sasuke will do to naruto (or what he'll make him do XD). Unfortunately, i can't think of anything i'd want sasuke make naruto do. That dress idea is great though. I also loved the part with naruto lookin' like a sex god in sasuke's clothes....and comando-ing in his shorts!!!! XD so great so great. Your 1st person pov is really well done and narrated, sounds like naruto. Very satirical. anyways, sorry about work, but i hope it'll be much lighter! Good luck on the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i will forever demand my naruto/neji or naruto/garra pairing oh and if u could through in an odd pairing like shikamaru/naruto but only a little XD
person Yukio
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More SasuNaru and NejiNaru. its not GaaraNaru right? Please not. More Updates
person kkkkkkkk
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!! It's a jealous Sasuke! The best kind there is! I think that it would be amusing if he either tried to jump-attack Gaara, or corner Naruto in one of their class to "punish" him. Then you would be able to work in a jealous Neji too! And possibly bring in a suspicious Itachi since Sasuke had been planning to keep his perferances for Naruto a secret. Well, that's just what I think. Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck.
person BlacKat
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOPPIE! Another chappie UPdated! ^_^ -> T_T Felt 4ever!
SO I'm guessing Gaara likes Naruto! XP Obviously! The nice hot kiss during rehearsal is a dead give away if you ask me! :P
Let's see... burning eyes from Sasuke to Naruto usually isn't a good sign...:shrug: I don't really care what happens next to what Sasuke is going to do to Naruto as long as it's exciting and HOT and maybe something that could give me a good laugh! ^_^ K can't wait for the next chappie!
person naru-sasu
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You're good at writing, but stop the neji/naruto & gaara/naruto, because NARUTO & SASUKE BELONG TOGETHER FOREVER! well, that wasn't excepted, wasn't it? but stil more sasuke & naruto action! then i'm a happy little rapid fan, who just loves naruto & sasuke, but sucks at thinking of a name to myself... can't help it!
person Cloud_Haven
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok when is Itachi gonna show up....?
person lalala
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... Sasuke's gonna be jealous!! Who is the final pairing anyway? Or is it a suprise?