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by NexusW

person vampchic
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah!! Naruto and Gaara rutting around on stage in front of an audience...Mmm, what a delicious image!!!! Cant wait for the next chap. I just know that's going to be a whopper. Am I right??? Loved the dream bit. That was funny as hell and brought a whole bunch of lovely images.XP Seriously cant wait for the next chap. Update soon please!!
person Jem
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mwa ha ha, awesome chapter. I really wanna see naruto in that getup -drool- And jelious little sasu-kins is getting mad. hee hee!
person ^^
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah! an update!! oh man I LOVED it!! the way you ended it made it seem like Sasuke was jeaaaalllllooouuss!! and I loved how Gaara and Naruto semi made out. cheyaaa! update soon!
person KitsuneFun
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I love the GaaraxNaruto chapter they are really cute together *sighs* but, I have a bad feelings this is a just a SusukexNaruto thing oh well, *gives thumbs up* Good Job anyways keep up the Good Work!
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! How can you end it there?! MORE SOON!
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot!!! i still think sasuke sucks and shouldnt get naruto ,also more naruto/neji.
im voting for naruto/neji or naruto/gaara XD i still hopping for naruto in a dress and getting attack by all the males :( but it didnt happen wahhh
person Manda-Kun
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha. I love this! You should have metioned it was AU though. <.< There is a few typos, but I love the writing style. Though, in a few parts it switches to like, third person view and that confuses the bejeebies out of me. o.O I LOVE Naruto's cocky attitude in this though! <33 His inner monolog makes me giggle. xD I think your idea for this is great!!! Please update soon! ^.~ And know you sure got yourself an adoring fan.
person blisblop
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmph!Ok,for smex you will be forgiven.This was a pretty good chap.God,I should have gone to Japan for a year of school,kids there seem so damn creative,the adults have no lives however so I wouldn't stay.Naruto is a charmer and is in a fairly light denial.
person Nissie
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waii! I love this fic! Yay for a Vanilla Neji (haha, I can SO imagine him listening to Gackt!) and yay for a Naruto who thinks he's straight but reeeaaally isn't ^^

Yeah, I didn't really understand what you meant by that small chapter thingy, but if it means reading more of your works I say YES! GIMME GIMME! Please? Okay, I hope you'll update a lot! I like your style and the storyline is fantastic!
person evil
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd... Naruto's in denial! OMG! He's seducing all the hawt men and not knowing it! I can't wait for the next chapter! *Grins* Update soon, ya?