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by NexusW

person yuki-chan
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go nexus-sama, go!!!! i like your fic!!!! IT ROCKS!!!! HELL YEAH!!!! hope naru-chan will always be botttom, ne?... oh please, dear author, PLEASE?!?!?!?! and please post the updates soon. drives me crazy when i check my fave fics every other day only to find them still not updated. i'm looking forward to chap. 6!!! "Who do you belong to, Naruto?!?" Mwahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh hahahaha, if guys in reality really willing to do 'that' kind of play in front of so many people, one really got to worship them! lol. very humorous fic, so hope you update soon, since i luv this! gambette!
person macy
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! I can't believe this is the first time i've read this fic! i was so sure i've started it before. however, it's all cool, coz i was pleasantly surprised!!! this is so awesome. naruto's POV is fantastic. i like the sarcasm. it's very entertaining to read. very witty and amusing. i cannot wait when sasuke gets back into the picture *evil fangirl laugh* awesome job so far! oh! oh! i especially liked naruto sending neji's demo tape to herbal, hahahaha XD soooo funny!
person dagget
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was funny but a little garbled. There were little bits that just got slightly confusing. Like you have to watch your perspective. It would switch to third person for a sentence here and there. All in all though, great story! Can't wait for more!
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's official...LET THE BATTLE FOR NARUTO BEGIN!! Update soon!!
person obi
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seriously! I'm beyond words here... YOU ROCK. I love this story, you better continue it! *bribes with cookies*
person Tiina
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddamnit!! You can't cut the story like that!! It just..cruel...Now, hmm, is this NaruSasu fic of Naruto/every guy on this fic..? Well, can't say I don't like when Naruto is being harassed by his friends, it's just so fun to read and especially when they're at school!! xD
So: When. Do. You. Update????
person dreamsraven
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH!!!! yay!! gaara got to make otu with naruto!! GaaNaru is like my ultime favorite pairing. Then comes NejiNaru and lastly SasuNaru....then Everyone and Naruto becuase Naruto is my little Naruhoe...did i spell hoe right or is it ho???....whatever....please update soon! ive been reading your fic and was thinking how realy well writing is is! i love the whole first person thing...you make Naruto hilarious in fact this whole fic is hilarious!! please update soon.
person Ryouke-Tezuseme
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD hahahahahahha omg that was fucking funny! Lol the whole Neji with herbal was totally turning me on XD~ jeez id give anything to hear him moan XD~ i like the gaara and naruto relationship its so cute >,<=! Ohhh wonder what sasuke is gonna do! like one of the best stories i read XD~ update soon please and that short chapter you were talking about well i think you should! im sure itd be good =)
person Puchu
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... Neji and Herbal. That's just ... PRICELESS!!! *dies laughing*

great work! please continue soon~!