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by NexusW

person AprilC
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was so funny oh make sasuke make naruto let him have a piggy back ride and sasuke feels up narutos chest and licks his ears and neck!!!! i think that would be great! thats my idea anyway it sucks i know!
person blisblop
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never watch cable tv(TV's are to veiw DVD"s and Vhs"s on period,I refuse to get brain washed by 1003rd rate American crap when I can read!No way, my brain space is too precious ) so I am guessing at this commercial thingy,sounds amazing,sigh,I like Neji kun.so awesome!There are some great moments so far in this fic and Itachi has been mentioned.This could be too amusing.Thank you for the fiction!
person queen_o_cupcakes
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I already reviewed this
but HURRY UP AND UPDATE DAMMIT
thank you
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed the fic a lot. hopping for good things to come out of it. want to see naruto/neji or naruto/gaara mmm,but thats just my choice. would really like to see more naruto/neji the way you made them sound was so hot. lets get a new uodate fast paLLL. XD
person DragonSapphire
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!!!!! XD Omg, that was so awesome!! Lololololol! Sasuke is *so* teh geh, and Naruto in a dress...hell, I'd molest him, too! X3 Maybe you should draw that and/or Naruto in Saksuke's clothes - that would so rock, omg. T_T ~ <3

Effin' fabulous story! Rock on! *glomps*
person Leasan
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! just delicious!!
I love your fic, SasuNaruGaara is my thing, oh yeah! And Neji? OH GOD! Sweeeeeet!!
Just more Gaara, please *v*
I can't wait for the next part!!
I love your style of writing, really smooth and funny. Just great!
person .without_love.
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HERBAL ESSENCE POSTER BOY NEJI. w00t! This story amuses me. Lots. It really does... you'd better continue! -shakes her fist at Nexus- And poor Naru-chan! Oh, how I wish I could see him in the dress. It'd be great and if Sasuke was hanging onto him... I'd have such a nosebleed. xD!! SasuNaru is totally the smex. SMEX, I tell you. Fwee~ e_e;;
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's official: you rock. ^^ No, really, this fic is AMAZING! The characterizations (especially Naru-kun's) are spectacularly done, as well as the descriptions, and OMG, the PLOT!!! *squeeeeeee!!!* ^^ Alright, I'll shut up now. But in all honesty, this is an excellent idea and so far you've written it wonderfully, so keep up the good work -- I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! ^___~ Ja ne!!!
person Raphael Argai Thanatos
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what da hell is he gonna do with a herb-- ooooh!... OO
I GET IT! fuhuhuhuhuhuuuuuuu!!!!
person SilentInquisition
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love it. I always love the ones where Neji, Gaara, and Sasuke compete for poor oblivious Naruto. And you do it so well. Update soon, please!