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by NexusW

person tsuki
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Im loving this Please update it soon!!! poor Naruto...im loving it!
person angel of darkness
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
herbal boy!!!! lol gotta luv neji ^_^ -huggles neji plushie- lmao poor naru every guy is after him lmao cant wait for more!! u should have sasuke put naruto in a maids outfit and clean his house!! bwahahahahahha
person AprilC
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this is soooooooo good i cant wait for the next chapter! i love it so much yayness good job
person ^^
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg lovely lovely! please update soon! hehe, are all three guys lusting after naruto? hehe, that's hot. update soon then!
person -
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol *kills Neji* lol I loooooooved the ending of the chapter haha. That's so funny ^^; Loved the entire chapter! Too bad you haven't updated today :( lol but wowwww~ it's cute. I thought I was tired of reading love triangles :\ or squares lol. -_- but okay, you're getting me back into it! Just...don't make Naruto and Sasuke play hard to get ^^;;;; I want some hot hot kisses between the two of 'em! YUM! hot kisses are the best <3 Please keep writing. I love how tastefully witty it is ^^
person vampchic
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Naruto is just too sexy for his own good.XP Cant wait to see what other things that Sasuke will have Naruto do. Or wear.*Snickers* Ahh, really, who could ever resist a groping Sasuke?? Or a jealous Gaara? And Neji does sounds like the type that would use Herbal Essences.^^ Wonder how Naruto will get out off that awkward situation? Really cant wait to read more. Update soon, kay?
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pfffff....Herbal shampoo heh?

Well, that was an amazing third chapter..BUT!! You're such a god damn TEASE!!!!! That's just too mean!! Normally I'm not really into First-chapter-fuck-me-now fics, but THIS is driving me insane!!!
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It's so fun to see Naruto panicking like that though!!!!So..Sasuke's after him, Neji and probably Gaara too....hmmm...Niaouw!! Things are gonna be awsome!! * Shiny eyes...ya right...more like I have flashlights in the orbits alright* héhé

I'm still waiting for Itachi though...and the party and Sasuke and even more panicking Naruto!!
Mouaahahah....I really LOVE your fic.

Well keep it going!! Chappy 4...chapy 4 han han...han han...*My stupid brain is taking over..sorry* héhé
See ya
person queen_o_cupcakes
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So very very cool
Keep writing!!!
person Sukara
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good but still OCC-ness.... -.-
person madameshannon
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is very entertaining and just plain fun to read. please update regularly so that i have something to look foward to. here is a rose just for you,
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