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by NexusW

person chicken_little
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I knew it! Neji + Herbal Essences = OTP!
Another great chapter, I look foward to more! *greedy*
person T.K-kun
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, nice ending line! man, kid of funny, cuz I use herbal essence. i've got
the neji hair! haha. ugh, i would NEVER be ale to update as often as you. good
job on that! really, i compliment you on that. kudos to you. anyways, this was
more intimate and gives away a lot in one go. man, naruto like attracts the
wrong sex, lol. "naruto, you're not gonna attract girls with you black outfit. haha"
great chapter and man... sasuke's gona have a butch gf at the party? he sounds
REALLY tiny compared to naruto for some reason. haha, hope naruto's the uke!
"sorry naruto-kun!" haha, actually not really sorry about that. go sasunarus! update
soon, but at the rate you're going, should i eve be asking? haha
person Cloud_Haven
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was funny*fell off her chair laughing* heh poor Naruto! please update!
person Shikashinigami
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is friggin' awesome!! I can't believe it! It's sooooooo hard to find good fics these days!! *Swats at hair* Neji and Gaara and Sasuke are all sooooo cool!! Ans I can't wait till' the party. Itachi's my most favoritist character! I also like Naruto's new look it's ssseeexy!!! Whoo-hoo. Can't wait till' you update! Ja for now!
person BlacKat
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I read ur story and so far it GREAT! ^_^ It's totally hilarious and I just can't get enough of it :P I can't wait for the next chappie! -_- wonder what Naruto's gonna do with Herbal shampoo :ponders: o the possibilities! ^_^ UPdate soon pls!
person oOKeairaOo
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm honestly trying to figure out why this story has only four stars. Sure, I saw a few mistakes, but the humor far overshadows those. All you really need is maybe a beta. Oh, the unfairness of the AFF rating system.

I love your Naruto in this story, he's hilarious, and I'm liking the first person POV. The fast updates are also definitely a bonus. I'll look forward to more from you!
person clowangel
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* Oh dear.. Poor Naruto-san. ^^; He has to wear a ..relatively short dress to a party with Sasuke. O_o; And Sasuke..is being a horny little bastard. ^^; I really do feel bad for Naruto but I can't bring myself to well..erm..sympathize. XDD
person Sukara
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OCC-ness....-.-
person silverfox
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was an intersting atart i was laughing the whole time i read it very good so keep up the good work
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! *squeels and glomps you* What a fantastic idea!!! I love it!!! ^___^ Very well done -- I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!!