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Oh, deaaaar... we'r in trouble...^^

Wow, so far this is really good. I hope you continue it soon, i like it.

Very cute beginning. I like the way Naruto acts in this one. I saw some grammar mistakes, but they can be easily fixed. I can't wait to see more!

LLooOOOOooLL

Neji in a Herbal add!! Wow that'd be fun!!^^

I love the way you wrote this...the part with the pricks and all...well done and quite hilarious!!
I like the idea too...can't wait to know what kind of Hell Naruto will have to go through!! Poor thing...I just hope he's gonna come back at Sasuke for this whole slave thing somehow...*evil perverted grin* héhé

Well on that...you MUST give us a second chapter soon!!!!!*koneko's eyes*
Great work!
See ya

now that was just plain amusing and cruel keep up the good work

haha! Nice nice nice. I like it! lol I'm loving the comedy POVs. Really really nice ^^ Though I'm not a fan of girly-Narutos, I'm glad that you still have him be his strong self :P As long as he doesn't enjoy wearing that dress forever *shudders* lol GO NARUTO! Nice fic ^^ I hope you update this at a continuous pace!

Love it. So is Itachi going to make a showing?

Keep up the excellent work, Coolsa.

Like the caustic inner monologue! Yay for a wry, witty Naruto. Now all we need is to see him on his knees, in front of Sasuke, flushed and panting from... you get the idea ^_- Can't wait to see where you take this. I'm guessing since you made a point of talking about Gaara and Neji specifically and in great detail (relatively at least) that they, in addition to Sasuke, will be lusting after Naruto? *crosses fingers* Because nothing makes me happier than a Gaara vs. Neji vs. Sasuke in a winner takes all battle for Naruto's heart (or ass) (Naturally Sasuke should win, but he should have to TRY, ya know?) Haha! Anyway, awesome story, please update soon!

LOL! hilarious, i loved this second chapter! the sarcasm here and there is still
good. haha, when i was going to see the next title of the next chapter. i had
to laugh. lacy black dress,hmm..whatcouldhappen with that? with naruto just
becoming a slave for sasuke. haha.wonderfully done, i really appreciated the
quick update, but it'd be nice to have oe more! haha. like your story. =)

I like how this is going so far. I look forward to see what happens, Naruto in a collar just seems too sexy! I can't wait. Nice job on this so far though. Keep up the good work.