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by NexusW

person ladywolfTerri
schedule March 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!! Please update this soon!!! It is too damned great!! So funny!
person midnight wolf girl
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE IT ALREADY!!!!!!! This is a really really good story. Hurry up, pleases?!? The suspence is so anoying. Haven't you ever heard the saying, "curiosity killed the cat," well suspence kills more painfully.
person Midori Tachibana
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, you could really run with this Herbal Essence thing... Like Say, Someone in the commerical industry saw it and wanted to know the mind behind it. Who knows! Naruto could be hired as and creative consultant for MTV or maybe someother big name company that has a bit of a risque advertising campaigne. (by the way I suck at spelling so if I goof, do forgive, I beg of thee) I think it would be awesome! (and Naruto wouldn't need to worry about employment after school is over)

I don't know since I haven't read the other reviews yet, but the guy in th room with Naruto... gotta be Itachi. He's bigger then Sasuke and has longer hair. Just my guess.

Please keep writing! I love your story. The way you write Naruto is genius! If Naruto were an average, American teeneger, the way you write him would be exactly how he would think and talk! Please keep up the good work!

Midori ^-^
person Akuma Sora
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that last chapter was so funny. I could not stop laughing. I really like your story and I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work
person Inuzuka
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL. To the special chapter, as well as the rest. I'm just hoping you lean towards the comedic, smutty side (since OOCness tends to abound) for the rest of it. Hm...why is Naruto always such a slut in fanfics? It's kind of unsettling.
person Aya
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-.-;
I thought it was a new chapter.
Gr..
Awesome story.
But..
-attacks-
AHH!
Damn-ed suspense..
-__-;
Oy..
SasuNaru, onegai?
person Neko-chan134
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
funny stuff..wait a minute red eyes? *fake gasp* THA'S ITACHI NARUTO!! oooohhh otouto is gonna be maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad....and a certain pet will be punished. ;) poor neji....i think i have a segment for your next chapter...xD " "I decided to go into show business...my friend likes acting and said that this would be a good place to start....but i had no idea what he meant. he tricked me and it tuned into this...they're sending the money in the mail...really!" neji says his face still a little red." and then go on as planned. i'm lovin this story!
person z
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's gonna sleep is Itachi! GAsp! Tell me Sasuke stops him in time! Damn you Itachi! lol Great story just loving it!
person lalaland
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how long until naruto gets some time with neji or gaara long live naruto/neji. PLEASE update soon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was funny. Please continue, please do. and oh yeah, i love Neji. ^_^