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by NexusW

person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO FRICKIN FUNNY. ~I love you. :D
person Youko Senshi aka Kitsune Warrior
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahahaha... THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
And so true... Neji is a god. ^_^
I eagerly await your update.
person Crystal
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Oh god that was the funniest thing I've read in a very long time! Great. Now, please, get the next chapter out soon :)
person hypnotic
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that was funny! i had to stop reading for a second cause i was laughing so hard! the whole when neji see the ad thing, priceless! i really love your style no lie, your great at what you do and i hope you update soon!

~ ja.
person Akimoto
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over sence she has to sit on the floor laughing* hehe wonder what Neji will do to Naruto XDD! oh godz please update!
person hime
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good god, that was hilarious. i lol'ed when naruto coerced neji to do the commercial in the beginning, and somewhat expected to see it get into the hands of someone else, but his entire family? that's too funny. and yes, neji is perfect. after this fic is done, you should really write one focusing on neji. love your style, your sense of humour and the random insanity that you conceive in that wonderful brain of yours. needless to say, i'm waiting for the next update even though i really enjoyed this little omake~
person Kai19
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was hilarious!! I cant wait to see what happens next!! I wonder if Itachi will show up, and if he'll recognize Naruko as really being Naruto. Especially if he speaks.. lol!! Please update soon, k?
person ladygizarme
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww well as much as i woulda LOVED a new, real chapter, that was still great as fillers go, i got way giggly imagining it heehee, oh what fate lies in store for naruto when neji sees him next lol
person losthimagain
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just laughed my ass off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really hope this leads to more of the crazy love square and I REALLY NEED a foursome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I hopre that Neji still like Naruto so I can have my square and YOU MUST update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person Trekiael
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, not disapointed at all. We had to see the spot and you did it very well, very funny. With all the thing about Neji being so perfect but humiliated himself by doing a herbel essence spot naked. Well, in the end, Neji is still perfect and it's hot, but it ruin his image, it's degradating! Anyway, good one. Look forward for the real next chapter. Good luck! Ja ne!