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for Girls' Night Out

by bean1498

person Anon
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh that was wicked!! its me...kaisgirl112@yahoo that was reli good...maybe u culd do a sequel?
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you definatly need to do the others for this series! Holy crap! Excellent characterization, superb wording and well..... HOT! Sorry. I have no intelligence right now. Good god, that was sexy. Continue!!!!
person boredathome
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha...HOT!!! ruffling kakashi's image of a man in control always...I LOVE IT!!! You should really continue this. To gain a wider audience, you could maybe try doing a chapter. on each couple. Haha it would be so funny if, well, really WHEN ino finally gets shika in the sack. Also, you could have chapters on how chouji and (wut's the other girl's name) get together or their wedding night. But it could be more work for you (shino really). ^-^ Just suggestions. I would really like it though if you continued this fic. Hope you update soon!!!!
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just plain awesome. I'd say something more intelligent, but I'm afraid my brain's abandoned me for the night. Gotta love it when Sakura decides to be sneaky, though.