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for Dead Brother

by onesickmind

schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ack >_< That was hard to read, but I did, and I liked it.
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That was weird. I have to admit I laughed out loud once or twice. Actually, I hope I think of the rasp in the ass every time I even see applesauce. I'm almost as evil as you. ^_^
person moo
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. i have never read a torture fic....and i never will again...am i sick 'cause i thought this was funny as hell?
person Rae
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was......gross
person Chi
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought nothing could shock me anymore but this fic really did... eww...
person Redeye
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm very fond of stories where Sasuke gets his revenge and doesn't go all mushy like half-way through, this was no dissapointment! The entire time I was reading it all I could think was a combination of "Freakin cool! and Ick." Fan-freakin-tabulous.
person kitten
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooomygod.
Okay, I was throughly disguted up until
that part about Itachi 'Barking' into
Sasuke's ear. That part had me laughing
so hard I bet the neighbors could hear.
Awesome fic.
person the pervertt
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, I have to say ^_^ I LOVE Sasuita, I think its super hot. hotter then itasasu methinks :3 I was REALLY excited when i found this O_O but I can't believe I was laughing so much >__< this is suppose to be sad girl! and doing all those horrible things to itachi awww. You should write another one! a really hot one.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending. I must admit, this story line is much more realistic than if Itachi had been struggling and crying out. He's more of sadistic bastard in my eyes, and would probably get off knowing he was making Sasuke frustrated to the point where his torture methods would be almost frantic in their hope of making the elder Uchiha feel pain. Throughout the story, the small incites to their former life, and what happened during the massacre only added to the (comedy) drama. I will admit some parts made me want to run to the bathroom and spill the contents and others made me lean forward in shock, some I laughed and other's I nearly cried. The point; an over all well written story, flowing easily and yet always remaining captivating. I would love to see more of your work in the future, congratulations on a wonderful story.

--SkippingAlice
person random_reader
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm wow.. that was indeed more comedy xD but very well-written ^-^.. though kinda sad that Itachi died x..x; nya~ great story!