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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT DUDE! Your name suits! 0.o I'm the writer of Prize: The Heart of Konoha. I read one of your stories after reading your review. Shit. I'm going to update soon. OMG. Your story is disturbing O.o
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I am completely and thoroughtly DISGUSTED. And I mean that in the best way possible. :-D But seriously, at times, I thought I was going to hurl. That was seriously sick. Congratulations. You have scarred me for life.
On the plus side, it was very well written. You did your research well, descriptions were vivid, use of language gets a 10......
My mental scarring is my fault anyway. When I saw 'Uchihacest. Torture. PWP', I just thought, 'Okay, Sasuke's gonna poke at Itachi for a while, maybe make him bleed a bit, and then on with the smut!' Boy, was I wrong.
Well, good job anyways. I mean it when I say you write superbly. :-D
~LauRa
On the plus side, it was very well written. You did your research well, descriptions were vivid, use of language gets a 10......
My mental scarring is my fault anyway. When I saw 'Uchihacest. Torture. PWP', I just thought, 'Okay, Sasuke's gonna poke at Itachi for a while, maybe make him bleed a bit, and then on with the smut!' Boy, was I wrong.
Well, good job anyways. I mean it when I say you write superbly. :-D
~LauRa
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. That was so disturbing. Poor Itachi! I have never been so shaky after reading a story. Hell, I've never been shaky. OOC on both parts... Or not. Maybe Sasuke would torture his brother that way. It was very disturbing, though. GAH. BUT, after all of this, I like it a lot. Beautiful work. XD <3
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I am quite confident that I will be able to eat applesauce, if I ever hear someone talking about consonant classes I will probably think of this fic. This whole thing was hilariously gross. My favorite part was the reminiscences about the brothers having sex when they were younger, and Itachi having raped their mom was a nice touch too. And attributing Sasuke's lack of a sense of humor to his almost laughing when Itachi made a joke while raping him is actually quite brilliant!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
Congratulations. You have written the most violent thing I have ever read. I was disgusted. Repulsed. Horrified. Stomach churning and bile in the throat.
And yet I read til the very end. So congratulations.
Congratulations. You have written the most violent thing I have ever read. I was disgusted. Repulsed. Horrified. Stomach churning and bile in the throat.
And yet I read til the very end. So congratulations.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke was not thinking ,Itachi wants his attention,really,really bad for such a casual guy he should have played that.He could have used some version of stocks and left him near his old Akatsuki buddies for a year or two,then looked into the matter.Nope he could just ignore him all together on a wall in a cell or yeah, he could rape him into warm applesaise.It was kinda spazzy to ruin his tightness first but thats Sasuke all over when it comes to Itachi.Anyhoo first time Iquicklyskimmedoverthis I missed the end,Sasuke putting the iron on himself!! ,it changes the entire outlook of it I think.I know I reveiwed this before,I can't remember if I got shirty or not about it...so I will say you are a more than competant writer for sure,this story is too much for me however.Malfis malfactorium was too much for me too.Anyhoo you remind me of this 17th cen.writer,he did really bawdy stuff intellegently,can't remember his name but yah, he lifted gross to a fine art and wrapped his philosophy in it.Bunyon? Rudyard?I'll get back to you.Good luck and thanks.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was probably the most disturbing thing I've ever read..... it WAS the most disturbing thing I've ever read. But I loved it!! I liked how you portrayed Itachi, he seems the kind to laugh through something he's done to other's so many times. I'm pretty hard to disgust, and this fic almost had me feeling phycically ill... almost. I love all your fics, and this one did not fail to please. Great job and I can't wait for more of your fics!!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what about THIS one...O.o
it would be better if you didn't ask why...*wink*
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it would be better if you didn't ask why...*wink*
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Comedy....yeah....comedy o.O
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that WAS funny. I never thought a torture fic could be so funny, but it's surprisingly light. I'll tell you that I smiled in a confused sort of way throughout it, when usually torture leaves me in tears... I think that is a compliment, even if you weren't going for that kind of reaction it takes a certain something to write such a totally gruesome and inhumane story and make it easy to read.
I adore Itachi in this one, even though he actually does little except sit there and continue to live, the idea of him is very, very appealing. I adore how you made him take pain easily, have no remorse and even manage to laugh at both Sasuke and his own situation, because there's nothing like a psychopathic sadomasochist with a sense of humor. The ending was probably the best, the way Sasuke reacted, how Itachi finally died, the final image of Sasuke trying the torture himself, to prove that he can... that was beautiful. I think that was possibly the only truly sad moment in the fic, the point at which you realise that Itachi is really not going to magically get better (because he acts like he will, doesn't he?).
The one piece of critisizm I would give is the rape scene... I don't know, I just think it's superfluous... the fic is great without any sex involved and it really makes no difference, actually to me it was kind of gruesome when the rest really wasn't... well in any case it doesn't take away much so I guess it doesn't matter.
I adore Itachi in this one, even though he actually does little except sit there and continue to live, the idea of him is very, very appealing. I adore how you made him take pain easily, have no remorse and even manage to laugh at both Sasuke and his own situation, because there's nothing like a psychopathic sadomasochist with a sense of humor. The ending was probably the best, the way Sasuke reacted, how Itachi finally died, the final image of Sasuke trying the torture himself, to prove that he can... that was beautiful. I think that was possibly the only truly sad moment in the fic, the point at which you realise that Itachi is really not going to magically get better (because he acts like he will, doesn't he?).
The one piece of critisizm I would give is the rape scene... I don't know, I just think it's superfluous... the fic is great without any sex involved and it really makes no difference, actually to me it was kind of gruesome when the rest really wasn't... well in any case it doesn't take away much so I guess it doesn't matter.