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for Dead Brother

by onesickmind

person Billy
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love yaoi / shonen-ai and all the shit that goes with..
I've read your stories and though I don't always review I love 'EM!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the great work and can't wait to see what you'll pull off next!
ever loyal...
-Billy
^______________^
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay...saw this again and just HAD to stop by and give you a *Nice Guy Pose*
This Is so fucking sick it's ridiculous! I laughed my ASS off! Itachi was fucking SMASHING! And my goodness, Sasuke was SMASHING too! *snickers madly*
The Rasp part made ME feel pain. Do you have any idea how desensitized I am? GAAAA!
I loved it how you made Sasuke "hurt himself" at the end...so creepy...I just LOVE it when Sasuke is creepy! *Evil Grin*
Itachi and Sasuke's interaction was perfect! *Still chuckling about it*
And the pulley system...*Thumbs up!*
"Canola Oil" ---I work in a grocery store so this made me EXTRA chuckle!
Anyway, my Boyfriend seems to like torture, but hates YAOI...So I'm in the process of convincing him to read it too. *LOL*
In MY opinion, (what little value it has in the long run), you should have more reviews.
*Big Dorky High Five!* Wow, I've even used a unique action right there! This must be compelling!
*GLOMPS*
d(^-^)b
P.S. I didn't know if you would think that last review was good or bad so I thought I'd go ahead and clear that up right now.
I was simply speechless at the time, you see.
I am emotional sometimes. LOL!
Enough enough...I've probably frightened you already...*second guess*...Nah...
Later!
person Liliath
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!! ITACHI DIED AND IN SUCH A HORRIBLE WAY!!!!!NO!!!*starts crying* MOTHERFUCKING SASUKE YOU DORK'S BITCHING DOG OF SLEEVE COMPANY DIE!!! NOW!! I HAFTA COMMIT SEPPOKU AS MY LIFE HAS NO MEANING WITHOUT ITACHI!*reaches her katana* BY BYE WORLD!!IM COMING, ITACHI-SAMA!!*commits seppoku*
person lissiel
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that's the sickest fucking thing I've ever read.

... I think that's a compliment?
person Rai
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is disterbing and very gross

It's very well writen
person blisblop
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm,ya..I would not finish reading it,yeah it was funny but you where describing the destruction of two works of art I'm fond of so,I skipped to the end,I'm really sQUicked(spelt that wrong.)Hows 'bout writing some of the earlier things Itachi mentioned,sounds more like my type of strange...uhhh,thanks for the effort
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, my my my! I'm just pausing in the middle to catch my breath. Ooo! YAY! This is very enjoyable indeed! Nice... *Whips out omnipresent white tissue to stop the never ending flow of blood from her nose* *Ahem*...okay, i think i am calm again...I'm just going to go read the rest now. Yeah...heh. d(^-^)b
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Suddenly can't help remembering why she fell in love with Itachi in the first place.* *Sniff* *Wipes away single tear.* *Claps graciously for you!* *Bows, turns, and walks away.*
d(^-^)b (two thumbs up!)
person just_me
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* That was funny. Poor Sasuke... Itachi just keeps on mentally torturing his lil' bro.
Even with all the torturing things going on, I couldn't picture Itachi all broken. I mean, with the way you described it, he was suppose to be dead already. And then i mean dead a looooooong time.
Oh and the last bark in Sasuke's ear. *Mad cackle* Even in death, Ita-kun rulez!!!
I didn't get the part where Sasuke suddenly turns a hot iron on himself. It's his own damn fault he let Itachi go through all kinds of torture, and when Itachi dies he suddenly feel guilty?! 0.o;;;
But through it all, I liked the story nonethless. I like your writingstyle. Keep it up. ^__^V
person just_me
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW, I thought that Itachi meant weasel... I could be wrong though. ^^;;;