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by Tekko

schedule December 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ooh, this is the hottest ZabuzaxHaku fic I've read! When Zabuza said, "You belong to me. You're nothing without me. Remember that only I can make you feel like this-"  I nearly came, myself! God, it was so hot! That alone was worth the read, but the rest is great, too! So sexy! Wish I were Haku there! Zabuza's dominance is quite a turn on!

person Makkoska
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You made a wonderful fic for these two, really loved your Haku! <3
person oohshiny
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, that was sad... poor haku...... zabuza should learn to appreciate haku more...
person Pepp
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snatches Haku plushie and hugs it to her chest* I loved it! The perfect balance! Its hot and sweet all at once! ^^ *sniffles* And it makes me think so much about them... I seem to be in a Haku/Zabuza mood tonight.... *sniffles again* And I keep thinking about what happened to them!!!!!!

*starts to cry*
person Visitar
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is another one that I'd like to see continued! You writing is wonderful, but you need to continue some of these to really pull a reader in!
BTW-Loved the subtle hints of deeper feelings on both their parts!
person Bakura/MalikNum1Fan
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i thought that was a good fic. hads its bit of fluff in there too. great job.
person L.J.
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a -very- well written one shot. (?) It had me from hello, Haku's perspective was wonderfully flawless. Zabuza was equally well-written. The only thing that nags me is the lack of lubrication. Saliva is not an adequate amount, and if this was a real-life encounter, the uke would suffer serious internal tearing. Other than that, this is the best story I have read in this category so far. Kudos.
person DF
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great read, for me you did great with portraying them. It was spot on I think, so yea good stuff.
person Mela Kenzu
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm too happy to sign in right now! Your story is pure gold. Oh how I love the ZabuHaku goodness. Haku's total submissivness! His longing to only be Zabu-chan's tool. It makes me drool! I printed this story as soon I finished reading it! I rarely re-read things, but I believe I could read this seventeen times over! YOU ARE BRILLANT. I am a very happy person now ^_____^
person flame
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0o0o0o0o... prettty.....