schedule
September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That whole 'I fell better' line Sasuke says totally reminds me of that scene with the witch from 'Monty Python and the holy grail'
"She turned me into a newt."
"A newt?"
"Well...I got better."
XDDD
"She turned me into a newt."
"A newt?"
"Well...I got better."
XDDD
schedule
February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the second chapter best. Mostly because I found the first chapter a bit rushed with the lemon. But it's okay. Keep practising. *winks*
Anyways, it's always a funny situation when other people are around and someone having perverted ideas. Hehe so much like Kakashi to leave Naruto alone with Sasuke in that situation.
Anyways, it's always a funny situation when other people are around and someone having perverted ideas. Hehe so much like Kakashi to leave Naruto alone with Sasuke in that situation.
schedule
June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Really nice. Poor Naruto though, that had to be so embaressing for him. As for the little thing at the end, I know there's so many people who don't like an uke Sasuke, and I do understand his personality makes him a better seme than uke, but I still love seeing a seme Naru. I have dreams with Naru as a seme and Sasuke as uke. Even though some people have called Naruto the "ultimate Uke" because he's always uke.
schedule
December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow XD i loved this, it's my favorite so far!!! ur really good at oneshots, but what about making a longer one? like a sasunaru mpreg??? ;D eh?eh?eh? how bout it? plzzzzzz!!!!!!!! i also agree with you, i don't really like sakura, what am i saying i bash her in my sleep!!! and i'm not a big fan for narusasu...but sasuke does hae the word sasUKE in it..so i think thats were people get all their ideas...
schedule
November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
narutos last name is uzumaki dude
schedule
August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Cut it out! You’re a boy!”
“That’s why I am on top.”
“But I’m a boy!”
“That’s why your on bottom.”
“That doesn’t make sense!!”
I fell of my chair laughing, and now my ass is bruised. *pouts*
Anyways, that was a very funny and sweet fic. Sasuke is one sadistic guy.
“That’s why I am on top.”
“But I’m a boy!”
“That’s why your on bottom.”
“That doesn’t make sense!!”
I fell of my chair laughing, and now my ass is bruised. *pouts*
Anyways, that was a very funny and sweet fic. Sasuke is one sadistic guy.
schedule
August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question... Do you mind if I draw your story? I've been looking for some good doujinshi to draw and this was it. I'm just wondering if thats ok? ^-^ Keep up the good work. E-mail me if you would like to.
~Akira~
~Akira~
schedule
August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is soooo gooooodddd *drolling* write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeee
schedule
July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good lord that was so fuckin hot! it would've been even better if sakura or someone walked in on them and sasuke just kept going cuz he doesn't give a damn. muahahahahaha
schedule
July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it..but couldnt understand some of the sentences lol. Just weird grammar stuff, but I dont blame ya since you dont have a beta reader...I'm really lazy to re read my own stuff too.