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for Who's Your Seme?!

by xxdedxx

person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh-so-incredably-adorable!!! I loved this!!! ^___^ Very, very cute idea, and quite well done -- you had a nice mix of humor and...welllllll....... ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
person Arryelle
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I share your pain but your so good to your revewiers The nara /sasu pairs give me shivers of just not rightness but you made it more than bareble for the sasu /naru fans and that takes a great writer. That was so funny with Naruto's thoughts..... necromanic greatness lol
Your are so good at yaoi's I'm a coward I really want to write one but I don't want to mess up; I have a sick mine though I was going to make a Kabuto/Orochimaru pair since there so few out there but it makes a great couple too even though he's 50 lol.
but back on track YAY you gave us a taste of the wonderful sasuke being the seme but don't you think it's funny that sasuke has uke in his name lol
And the mirror part so damn sexy and in-genius *Drools*
oh and the whole thing with them going all night switching that was awsome oh the images in my head happy dreams tonight. I'm a Chou-Hentai alright..
And last but not least (intill your next great fic)
Thankies for the iruka/kakashi in advance I know you will make it great

Loves Arry
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
er... I think you mean nymphomaniac, but nymphomaniac is used with women.

Necromaniac means Sasuke likes dead people -_-;;
person Kativa-chan
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me no likey Sasu-uke. But I'll read it because you're such a good author ^.^
person MeLaiya
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, even if you did have to force yourself you did an excellent job. I thought it was wonderfully written and the boys were in perfect character. Keep up the good work.
person :)
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it!
person Obi
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great! I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter!! <3
And you know what I really REALLY like with your fic? it's the conversation between the two of them!
gaah! The whole story is love. *sends you cookies*
person Obi
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again! Aff decided to EAT half of my review. EVIL. anyway, what I wanted to say was that I really REALLY love the way you write the conversation between Naruto and Sasuke. It's oh so so Great! I love when they have there whole rival-thing going on, it wouldn't be sasuke/naruto (or naruto/sasuke) without it! So GREAT when Naruto thought something like, he would hit him but Sasuke would probably see it as forplay (something like that)... gaah! I love the whole thing! just wanna let you know! *sends you love and cookies* Let's hope aff.net doesn't eat my review this time... Keep up the good work!
person maria
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's no "uke" in Naruto...

Okay, that was a REALLY bad pun. XP
person Kativa-chan
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAH! Awesome! I love Naruto as the uke. I really, really, hate Sasuke being the uke in the relationship. Haha, I loved this ^.^