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Fics like this one makes life worth living. I love Kakashi and his clear observations. *giggles*
But geez... girl part... like that's a bad thing. Even if the seme is the one doing the invading, uke can take controle.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Let's see if SasUKE does his name honor. *evil smirk*

Girl part.Jeez sexist much?Naruto,you sound like an utter Barbie Doll,girls do this boys do that.Attitudes like that make me bitter,why force people into boxes based on their appearance,very shallow.You are gonna have the worlds most boring sex life and like most people who do not experiment or allow that there is more than one way to do something you will think rotten sex is really good and everyone else is making things up cause sex is nice but really....Yup,I sound bitter,you can ignore me of course (at your own peril)Here is a reveiw.I like the fic.It is amusing but the big dramatic point is lost on me,why wouldn't Sasuke want to get fucked?Is this just because he thinks Naruto will mess it up and damage him ?I know he isn't scared of a little pain,It can not be a macho thing cause everyone knows this is where" taking it like a man" comes from(in fact really macho guys fist,now thats scary.) and huge big strong guys get fucked all the time.This isn't a fetish fic so being on top in missonary doesn't matter and most people know that you can top from the bottom,I am totally confused.

absolutely loved it, cant wait for the next chapter. Im a naru/sasu fan myself so i really cant wait. Keep up the good work and update soon

Heh... I agree with you and Sasuke. Naruto-seme? Ah, well, all things must come to pass. (Where the hell did that come from...?) I loved this; so in-character. Especially Naruto. ^^ Kudos~

Well your lemons are awsome I love sasu/naru it fits the part like naruto is always messing up and clumilsy and you can't be that way during sex verses sasuke who does almost everything right. lol well I love it and I'm happy you are continueing do you think you could throw in a little kakashi/iruka lemon in there please.

Oh and your stories are not long in fact I wouldn't mine if they were longer. so please do not downgrade the length

Well update soon

Loves Arry

Very good fic. You write fantastically well. Your grammar is clear and your explanations are awesome. Keep it up. My favourite line was "under several layers of denial" or something like that. I like hints of humour ^^ I won't correct you on spelling because whenever people do that to me, I feel like gagging them. So here's to you writing awfully well!

Hehehe poor Naruto, but Sasuke does seem more like the seme in their relationship. Update soon!

Wow. Love it. So next is Naruto's turn, YAY!!!

Keep up the great work, Coolsa.

I really like the idea and the dialogue (I was laughing so hard at the conversation between Naruto, Iruka, and Kakashi!), but you might want to watch the run-on sentences. There were several times that by the time I got to the end of a sentence, I'd forgotten how it had started. Maybe you could turn some of the longer sentences into two. Other than that, I really enjoyed it!