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person Margaret
schedule May 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This did indeed make me smile. Wish it was on FFN, though as I would have read it a long time ago! A prequel with the mentioned first time in a closet would be interesting...hint, hint. Cheers
person david_holmes
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was both HOT and sweet!

How many times do I have to say that a wittily perverted Kakashi is freaking HOTTTTTTTTTTT!!! He *knows* he's manipulative and hot too! Oh Kakashi-sama!

Very fun oneshot!!
person ^_^
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
read all 4 of your kakairu fiction...i looooove them ^-^
so sweet huhuhuhu i wish they'd show something like that in the anime ^-^
hanyan~ thanks for the satisfying stories! hope you write more sex [turns red] i meant: keep on writing!
hehehehe ^-^
person alisha
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe...Kakashi is truely a manipulative son of a bitch...but really Iruka did practically beg for it....
Lovely fic, good job.

~alisha
person Choi-sama
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha! Cute! XD
person Bitchgirl
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're right, this did make me smile. AFF needs more fics like yours. Well characterised, funny, sweet, and hot. Someone finally telling Kakashi he's a manipulative bastard is just a bonus. I adore this, can't wait to read more of your work!
person Manda-Kun
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awws. Your right. That DID make me smile. xD It was cute, and quite amusing. <3
person Piero_Ken
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, you're right I made me giggle. It reminded me of those dialouges that we used to do in drama class, only less gayness, and use of the word "fuck".
person Leasan
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! so funny!! XD
oh, just sweet!
Will you continue it? 'cause that could be pretty interesting and damn funny!
person DeadUchiha
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It did make me chuckle! And you know what else? I fucking HATE Kaka/Iru. So anyways, yeah, I'd say you did a good job! Thanks fop that chuckle! How 'bout that! d(^-^)b *Smoochies*