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this was a cute fanfic.

that was just "WOW!" i truly, utterly love this one!!! i'm typically more of a gaara/sakura type, but your story had definitely changed my mind! please write more naruto fanfics. i love your style!

Mmmmh, I commend you for the effort of writing this, but I find the story too weird for me. I know Gaara isn't a soft, cuddly teddy bear, but having him come so forcefully to Hinata... frankly, I can't imagine a girl having erotic thoughts in that situation, more likely she'd be scared out of her wits. Any female in her place would think 'He's gonna rape me!' and crumble down or defend herself or beg for mercy or something.

Also, using all that talk about Naruto being forever in love with Sakura and Hinata not having a chance, then having him happily married to Tenten, well, looks very contradictory. Besides, even if later in the story you insinuate that she had already begun to replace him with Gaara, at the moment makes Hinata look stupid and coward for surrendering so easily and letting Tenten, who had even less contact and relationship with Naruto than Hinata, win his love. It makes her feelings for him very cheap. Yeah, this story is about Gaara and Hinata, but still...

I'm sorry my comments were bad.

Aaaawwwww, how kawaii! This was such cute fic! I loved it! I hope you write another one, or just continue this, either way, I'll be happy!

Absolutely lovely. I fell in love with this pairing the first time I came across it, and this is a very nice addition to their fandom. Very nicely written. They are a very cute couple, and you did a wonderful job capturing them. (I've never thought that Gaara was a monster) :) Anyway, very nice. Keep up the good work. More Gaara/Hinata, you are good at them.