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by Vermaxen

person moor
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the different perspectives of both stories, and how everyone's intentions, while naughty, were always made with the best interests of their team at heart. :)
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story
person Beulah Page
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to find another Team 7 fic. I usually find threesomes to be unrealistic and contrived, but this is one of two instances where I think it's the most viable option (the other being Mugen/Fuu/Jin from Samurai Champloo, which I think is an uncannily similar situation). It depends entirely on the dynamic between them: there's the trust and friendship (the males tend to be especially wary on these counts at first), the rivalry (primarily regarding strength and skill), the amount of time spent in each others' presence, and a lack of familial relationships.
person Cryptic Insanity
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word: Cute. ^^ I;m not sure what to say, but it's nice to see some threesomes written well. This sort of pairing is rare for me to find in a long run. Thank you for writing this!^^
person Kira-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By gosh this was great. Both stories were great. The first one was hotter, but the second one made me smile at the end. >_< OOOOH! Uber-cuteness.
person Raina
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never thought a threesome could work, honestly, until I read Naruto fanfiction. Heh, it seems almost wrong to have one without the other two doesn't it.
person Cac
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I missed that thi was updated! Nice, but did I miss something, some note or comment by you, just that, the chapters aren't really connected, they don't need eachother at all.

Oh and have you read Coming Home? It's really good, and a little like this, so..
person Lyraelin
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love, love it. It's funny and romantic and oh-so witty. Characterization is pretty much spot-on.
person Bloodywolf
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No yaoi? Thats great, I just can't understand how they always get the idea of Naruto and sasuke together... just not normal their both streights.
person dinkscythe
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no yaoi? *weeps bitter tears* i prefer my 3somes a little more intermingled; this seems like a collapsed double date. yet, the team 7 dynamics are alive and seriously kicking, so it's all good here.

"hitting it from behind...fair warning" *falls out laughing*