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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a good writer, but there were parts in the story that kind of made me lose interest...I can tell you right now that I got bored on chapter 7, angst is good, but too much of it makes it kind of tedious,unless of course the reader is an angsty person...heh heh now I'm not saying that this story sucks, far from it in fact I like it, I like where's its going and I can't wait to see how it ends...as far as grammar and spelling go, I don't think I saw any errors...so anyway I'm about to read chapter 8 can't wait to see what's next!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please don't abandon this! it's too damn good to let it go to waste! please do continue! i'm keepin' my fingers crossed..!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally they get it on! i love this fic!!!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh sh--! I LOVE IT! I love this two! please let it end up as SasuSaku, they are obviously made for each other!
And for the other two, Naruto and Tayuya... gosh I feel sad for Naruto., in my point it wasn't Sakura's or Naruto's fault that leads to things the way they are. Things just happened.. And for Tayuya... grrrr... hate the bitch now that she's Sasuke's fuck buddy. errr.. I just wanna strangle her!
Enyweiz, please do continue! and please let it end as a SasuSaku,. if not ...**teary eyed**... please post a warning before I start obsessing about them!!
And for the other two, Naruto and Tayuya... gosh I feel sad for Naruto., in my point it wasn't Sakura's or Naruto's fault that leads to things the way they are. Things just happened.. And for Tayuya... grrrr... hate the bitch now that she's Sasuke's fuck buddy. errr.. I just wanna strangle her!
Enyweiz, please do continue! and please let it end as a SasuSaku,. if not ...**teary eyed**... please post a warning before I start obsessing about them!!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to say but I didn't love it. Because there just aren't words strong enough to explain the awesomeness of this chapter and I'm so thoroughly glad you took your time and put out this amazing chapter. And now I feel like shit because I owe a chapter too... I think reading your work helped. You still rock hard, I mean oh so hard and you keep everyone in character so well. This was awesome. Keep it up. Maybe we'll squeeze another chapter out of you before next year. lol. I kid. But for real, it's been a minute since I posted too.
ANd yeah you rock, this was awesome. I'm so excited. Sakura's a complete whore for Sasuke. He's a complete whore for her too. XD
ANd yeah you rock, this was awesome. I'm so excited. Sakura's a complete whore for Sasuke. He's a complete whore for her too. XD
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you NEED to update, seriously, because those stories of yours are TEH GOOD!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm really loving your story!
i admitt, at first, it was a bit .."slow"
but it go much better after the first few chapters!
since this is a sakura/sasuke pairing, i was hoping you could include a little more of them :)
i am a little bitter about tayuya being sasuke's first xD
oh well~
continue to update!
i admitt, at first, it was a bit .."slow"
but it go much better after the first few chapters!
since this is a sakura/sasuke pairing, i was hoping you could include a little more of them :)
i am a little bitter about tayuya being sasuke's first xD
oh well~
continue to update!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!
Please update and soon! ^_^
-Jenna-
Please update and soon! ^_^
-Jenna-
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written Fic, great job =) Can't wait for the update!
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome, wonderful job, can't wait to see some more.
I love the long narrative aspects of it.
I love the long narrative aspects of it.