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for Forced Fate

by insomniac247

person Chelsey
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO I've been reading this since you started it. I've just been lazy about reviewing, but I've fixed that now and I'm so caught up! Update as soon as you can! I want to know what happens when Sakura wakes up! and seriously there should be a lemon soon enough with the suspense and angst. I'm so deparate for the next installment. Update soon and awesome writing!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person TellesAgnes
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!! This fic is getting excited! When you update please send me a email telling me! So Hope you UPDATE soon! Sayonara!!!
person azuuei
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read a lot of fanfics before, and to be honest, this is only the 2nd fanfic that I am/was anticipating like crazy. My goodness. You have a way of getting into people's emotions with words, which is something I find truly amazing.

Oh yeah, vampire-ish sasuke is luuurve! *throws heart confettis all over the place*

Good luck on the future chapters. We're looking forward to it. =)
person lunatic stabber
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!
person Beulah Page
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another stunning chapter. It didn't seem forced or lacking; you're being too hard on yourself. Rewriting again and again makes you doubt yourself unless you have the luxury to set it aside for at least a few days before going over it again. At least that's how it always seems for me. Internal conflict is always delicious, and this chapter was absolutely exciting. I really love how Sasuke is rethinking everything, especially his realization that all those goals are really important to him and how he's the only one who can accomplish them. A bit saddened that he thinks of Sound as home, though. And the last bit was truly heartwrenching.
person Ari
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! YAY! YAY! I'm soo happy you updated! =) WOAH, Sasuke leaving at first, I didn't expect that. He's touching her! OMG! *squeal* :OOO I'm dead. I wonder how long he'll be able to stay, though? What if Tayuya comes after him and sees Sakura? *wink wink* ;DD Cat fight. Lol.

Thanks for the awesome chapter. I'm very pleased with it.
--Ari
person Jenna
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must keep updating this fic!
I love it! I just wish Sasuke and Sakura could be happy
together. I hope she wakes up and sees him before he has time to leave.
Then she can beg him not to leave her again, It's just too sad.
Maybe Naruto can go with Hinata, and things'll work out alright?
Like I said, I love this fic!
Please continue to update often!
<3333
-Jenna-
person Kireiko
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah. Once again, Black Sheep-san, you've just proven how much I adore your work. The angst, the rancor and heartbreaking sweetness. I really am enjoying the direction that you've lead your story in. Keep up the awesome work!

~Kir

PS. Vampy Sasuke = Teh Secksi Sasuke

^______^
person Beulah Page
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHITBALLS! I'm almost speechless at how much I love this story. It's more than plausible, more than believable, it's REAL. (Can we insert this into canon, please? People seem to either love or hate Sasuke; maybe this will make people see why he is the way he is.) Having read fanfic for several years in various fandoms (some anime, some not), I can honestly say that I've never seen anyone get into the heads of characters as well as you've done here. The psychological exploration into the experiences, feelings, motives, and conflicting elements thereof (especially Sasuke and Naruto) is simply astounding, and I find myself agreeing wholeheartedly with the way you've portrayed them. It takes a lot for me to feel like I've actually *become* each character as their story is told.
person Letty
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGG NOoo!! You're at the very best part! you cant stop writing! *shakes you* PLEASE PLEASEE Continue SOOON.

I love your style of writing though, you seem to know how to put yourself in the mind of that character. It's crazy, you create completely different standpoints, reasonings and feelings for the characters that cant be clearly seen just by what we are informed of.

I'm not a big fan of the narusaku, but hopefully that will soon cease to exist and SASUKE will take over, MUAHAHA.

Please continue! I'll be checking back regularly