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for Forced Fate

by insomniac247

person aithne
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! I love it! Please keep writing and update soon.
person little_pink_haruno
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going! i really want to know whats going to happen! hope you up date soon!
person Karista
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I hate to admit it, but after making it through chapter 10, I almost actually like Sasuke. I mean, I would if I weren't loyal to the elder Uchiha first...but I at least have a bit more understanding to why he is how he is. This is a wonderfully detailed look into the bastard's inner workings...the way you paint his inner emotions and feelings makes it a bit easier to see why he's such a moody, brooding jerk sometimes and that he's still human underneath that cold shell. This was the first Sasuke-centric fic I've read and you've convinced me to be a little less harsh about putting off similar stories. Keep up the good work, just my luck that I happened to catch up right on a cliffhanger...added to my story recs. as this is one I definitely want to see through to the end!
person Sammie
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a most excellent story.
Please continue to update!
person azuuei
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. please tell me you're going to continue this. =3
i like the way you write and the way you showed the conflict in the character's emotions.
keep it up!
*hugs*



i'll look forward to chapter 11.. and beyond.. =)
person Ari
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so amazing. ;_; *tears of joy* I think this is my favorite chapter. x3 Poor Sasuke.. Sakura always has to make things so complicated, doesn't she? xDD Can't wait for the update! =3

About Sasuke and Tayuya, I think continuing it would be an intersting sub-story as long as it doesn't end up with Sasuke thinking, "Oh, what have I done?! Tayuya, I luff you!" You know? xPP
person dabid
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another perfect chapter done. a continuation of the one-shot would be great. it'll would be a pick-me up from knowing there won't be any tayuya anymore in the forced fate. truley, it does sadden me about that, because she had potential. will sasuke put his two-cents in about his "relationship" with tayuya? i'm wondering, are you going to be putting in any invoice from orochimaru? i would think after going through so much trouble of getting sasuke, he would be pretty pissed now that he's gone. i can't wait to see what sasuke going to say or do to sakura in the next chapter. you really know how to put a person on the edge of their seat. keep up the good work.
person Sakura-chan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens. ^__^
person barby
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to update!! aand soon plz!! i like this fic so much!! hehehe
person Saku-chan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
You always leave me wanting more... AND WITH THOSE DAMN CLIFFHANGERS...freakin ninja.. jeez..

OH MY HOW I LOVE YOU!!! Your writing always inspires me and like I said, I'll wait patiently and it was MORE than worth it. OMFG it was so good! I can't WAIT now untill the next chapter! Your fic is addictive I tell you! I hope it will be rather soon but DON'T rush it. ^_~ This fic is worth waiting for and I'm just so hooked by the way you write. I'm anxious for more as always and will wait patiently for your next chapter, as always!

I love the way you capture Sasuke so well, you view him, it seems, the same way I do. Like exactly. And I love it. I love Sasuke soo when I come across fiction this good it's just great! But keep up the good work! I can't wait for more but I will! <3