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You HAVE TO CONTINUE!! I mean, Sasuke still has to claim Sakura as his in one hot, passion filled night! I GOTTA find out!! Will Sasuke make Sakura his?? I hope he does...

Ahh~~!! Cliffhanger!!! How could you stop there!! *cries* But phew... Good thing Sakura didn't let Naruto go all the way, huh? ^^; Thanks for updating! You're a dear! *HUGS* Now GIMME MORE! XD

Oh, and the Tayuya thing? I'll pass. Seriously, I can't stand the thought of Sasuke and Sakura anyone else but each other. *waves SASUSAKU4EVA banner madly* And with Tayuya, it's too easy to turn it into a Mary Sue.

Oh my god, you're making me like Sasuke/Sakura! I have nothing against Sakura (actually I do but I still like her). And I do believe that her and Sasuke would work yet I can't read fanfictions about them. But your story is amazingly (?? is that how you spell this? I'm french) well writen and the first chapter just sucked me in. You wrote Sasuke's pain and anger in a way that I've never seen in stories before and then I cried. Even I couldn't describe it so well. And you manage to show why I adore Sasuke even thought people think that he is a spoiled arrogant power driven brat. That guy got seriously messed up and I understand why he did the things he did. Go Sasuke! Kill (sexy) Itachi!!

And I'm upset that naruto's jealousy has reached that level. I don't like that, the hate must never surpass the love or my little yaoi heart will break (you so should write more yaoi, I really appreciated that Orochimaru fic.

Loving the Tayuya/Sasuke thing too. Never saw that before (but I wanted too). I hope for more of that later, it's hot yo. Ohh a Sakura vs tayuya catfight. That would so rock. Shit, I think I really like Sasuke/Sakura. Shit, I like 2 het couples.

And sorry if this was long, I have to review for 9 chapters you know. Anyway, you rule, you rule, you rule (yes, i had to say it 3 times. The story really made me happy. And hyper) and the story kicks-ass. That's it.

/i just wanted to let you know that you are by far one of my favorite amature authors. "Forced Fate" is everything that I have ever wanted in a fan fic and more. Your writing style is amazing and the story progression is superb. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. ^_^


Keep up the amazing work.

wow you know my research is starting to show that sasuke
might be closer to ten or eleven when he leaves
think about it....naruto didnt graduate from the school
the first two times he tried. but he did pass the third time when he was 12
but sasuke and sakura passed their first try.
which would make both of them a year or so younger then naruto
they dont emphasize it but there it is.

i dont know i could be wrong but im not so sure anymore
he ACTS like he might be 12 or older its kinda hard to come to
terms that he could be that young

anyways GREAT fic! i love it

OMFG!!!!! Jeez~! This fic just keeps getting better and better! I'm so anxious to read the next chapter! You're like... the number one ninja of cliffhangers! I'M DYING!!!! But GYAH! Sasuke-kun is alive!!!!!!

I'm glad you like my reviews. lol. You should know I don't reply to just every fanfic I read! But yours, oh man... I check quite often to see when it's updated and what not. I reallylike it. And still I am SO in love with the way you write, and how descriptive you are, especially with the characters emotions. You left me hanging on the edge!!!! I want more! SOON!!!!! PLEASE I BEG OFF YOU!!!!

but grrr... as a writer I know it sucks to be pressured so I will wait patiently....


*pouts*

i don't mean to be a suck up but... this story just keeps getting better and better! i actually read the one-shot awhile ago but didn't even know that you were the same author. i love the way you made these two (stories) connect. a perfect blend. and the way you ended it... let's just say i can't wait until the next chapter come ups. will there be more tayuya? having sakura open up to naruto just to make sure he didn't notice sasuke... brillant! oh, i don't know if i metioned this before but excellent work on describing sasuke (1.his feeling 2.his motives for what he did and is doing) everyone is always bashing him because of his personality and and leaving konoha but they don't seem to want to understand his predicament. all they say is "stop being so sulky" and "get over the revenge thing" but come on... his entire clan was killed by his only brother (who he looked up to). after going through that, anyone would be like him. i think chaper one shows him how he truly is. it's the best sasuke (description?) ever.

Oh please Sasuke, just stay in Konoha!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

I already reviewed the fic on the other site but heck I'll do it again just cause. Three times from scratch do you say? Man, that's more starting over than I've ever remembered having to do! Very sensual this whole story it is (no I swear I'm not trying to be Yoda here). While I can't wait for the fireworks to ignite and mix up a whole mess of crap like an atom being split, I can't help but wonder what Sasuke thought waking up to someone yelling "Stop!" In reality a person who wakes up in an unfamiliar place, regardless of what they hear may be going on outside the door, wouldn't barge out until he got his bearings. I'm guessing the thunk is him falling out of bed? LOL. That would be funny: Sasuke coming to, wondering where he is, hearing stuff he knows he shouldn't be hearing going on outside of the room before suddenly someone screams "Stop!" Either that or he just turned over in his sleep one time too many!