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for Forced Fate

by insomniac247

person Saku-chan
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o

I'm so inlove with you're story. So descriptive, so in depth. I hang on every word, and the way you write is amazing. A Sasuke chapter? THANK YOU I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!!!! Wait... did you kill him...? NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Sakura will save him right..????

*cries*

Keep up the good work. I'll keep reading even without Sasuke. It's just that good!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Sasuke and Sakura together again! PLEASE let Sakura find Sasuke before anyone else... ;_;
person dabid
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is great!! i've read all of it but for some reason my computer wouldn't let me review. please update... it doesn't really matter when because a story this good, i can wait for. just make sure you don't leave this story unfinished. too many good authors do that. just wondering... why did you pick tayuya to be the person to live, was it because she looked like the only that might have survived? it's not that i'm mad about the decision, i was just wondering. and just before, i leave... is there going to mentions of a sasu/tayu, like the naru/saku in this?
person Raina
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! You're so evil, leaving a cliffhanger. Honestly though you've gotta do stuff like that to keep the readers coming back for more. This had a little mental picture of me falling to my knees yelling a prolonged "Nooooo!" to the sky. The only thing is...maybe I'm just confused so please correct me. Is this banging on Sakura's door the same time she woke from her dream, decided she had to go see Naruto NOW? Because if so...damn she is going to come home and wind up hating herself forever if she finds a half-dead Sasuke sitting outside her door, maybe with a little sign reading: "I WAS HERE WHERE WERE YOU?" hanging around his neck.

Honestly I can see this scenerio happening, wherein in an act of desperation and out of options, I think Sasuke might actually seek out Sakura for help. Unless he does a three hundred and sixty degree personality and character change when he returns back on the scene, I can see him doing this. And sadly I can see him doing this even if he DID change like that.

Interesting involvement of the Sand siblings. I was wondering where Gaara was while all this was going on.

Big risk returning to Konoha like that though. I feel really bad for the poor kid. Hope Sakura comes back in time!
person blisblop
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic.Strong well thought out plot,love imagry of Sasuke.So easy to flow into this reality.Boom fight with Kisame and a truly tight grip on Itachi's reactions(as far as we know him).Poor Naruto but he knows and the knowledge doesn't seem to make a difference,he still lacks some insight.Your death threats scare me.Blather rave,you get the point I approve.
person DeadUchiha
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAH! I thought you had updated...*makes sad face* :( well, consider this a poke *poke*poke* ah but still...sigh...i guess I'm not one to poke...blah...anyways, looking forward to more! (PS: sorry about my last review...i may have gotten a bit grumpy, but i really do think this is a very good story...so don't let my ranting and babbling annoy you...i have a problem with such things...ie...i tend to do it a lot...*blush*) BRING ON THE ANGST! XD
person DeadUchiha
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very angry with Sakura... RAWR!!! *Godzilla stomps Sakura* Ah but i know that this story is Sasu/Saku....It's just...so hard...not to...release...the hate! That awful bitch! Using my adorable Naru-kun like he is some kind of...RAWR! LOL sorry...Oh man i can wait to see how all this going to turn out...*quiver*...angst and pain! Angst and pain! Revenge! Revenge i say! Mwahahahahahahhaha! Blood and gore and death! Bring it! Nyaaaaaaaaa!

I'm really not a Sakura basher...I just tend to not like her in fanon...Your portrayal of her is very nice actually, which is why i hate her...lol...keep it coming!
person Saku-chan
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm SOOOOOO Inlove with this fic! I love the way you can spend an entire chapter explaining a character's emotion and the way you explained Sasuke's I especially loved [like the night he left and everything]. It was so in depth and personal. I really hope you update soon... I want to see more Sasuke too!!!! This fic is amazing to me so I thank you for writing it! ^_^

Awesome and keep up the good work. *peace fingers*
person DeadUchiha
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nya! I just got done with chappy 5...It's getting pretty interesting now! *grin* I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your big update! Alas...time is of the essence and i must do study type things now...but i will be back to check out the rest as i have time...*wink* Right now: I'm wondering if you plan on incorporating the effects of Orochimaru's cursed seal (Level 2 O.o) on Sasuke's psyche...after all, he WAS supposed to "lose himself" to Orochimaru's control after he ate...heh...the red pill (or whatever...Matrix moment...sorry...) That would be a nice wrench to throw in the design...So far, it seems that Sasuke has a lot of free will, but i wonder how much he can resist "Orochimaru's desires" if it came down to a real battle between himself and his ex-teammates...gah! Babbling now....I'm going to study...Laters! Keep up the good work! *hurries to study*
person Raina
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... that was intense. Of all of the phychological explorations of Naruto I've read, this one is by far the most well-written, in depth and original.... and not at all hinting of yaoi in the least! This made me smile, it really did. This is the way I think Naruto thinks of Sasuke; the whole love-hate thing they share is so tangible. You portrayed Naruto's struggle with understanding, examining, feeling and trying to look at things both through the lens of logic and the color of emotion was amazing. You made me feel his desperation, his desire to GET SASUKE. How Naruto's character changed is realistic and dramatic.

Nice little shocker there on Naruto and Sakura dating (I felt sad for Naruto esp. when he realizes he still can't hold a candle to Sasuke even three years later). Sakura's lust filled dream is a delight *turns red*... Sasuke is probably having the same kinds of dreams, LOL. I wonder if either will ever come to know that their love is and has always been mutual? I guess that's why I want Sasuke and Sakura together so badly. I've always found unrequited or next to impossible love to be one of the most powerful themes of storytelling. I remember a line from a favorite show of mine: "Are you kidding? You're the love of my life. Everyone else is always going to be second best."

These three chapters were a nice treat. And thanks for emailing me to let me know about it! God, I can't even update my own Naruto fic that fast (that's because I'm anal retentative about keeping everyone in character). Looking forward to the rest of this as usual.