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Yay u updated.
Ur writing makes me cry.0__0
Poor Sakura.WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I luv it. Please continue and don't give up on this fic. I'll give u a cookie if u don't.

Here...*tosses u a virtual cookie*.............see.MWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA.

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PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM! PEACHES AND CREAM!

KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING! KEEP ON GOING!

Hey this is an interesting fic.

Hope u continue with this. I luv it.

I luv this pairing and I luv ur fic. Keep up the good work. Okay?

Though Im not much of a Sakura fan, but the way u wrote this and still try to keep in character is pretty awesome.

Please continue on with this story. ^^

I love this. Don't stop now!

EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I like how this is going.

I'll wait for the next chap if u don't mind.

I love, absoluetly love your story. I'm so glad you updated. You've just made me the happiest girl in the world, lol. I've been hooked on this sotry since you first posted it up. ^_^

Whoa, whoa, you have got to keep continuing this. You've captured the essence of Sasuke... this sounds exactly the way I would imagine him thinking. Like the last bit. :)

Take ur time on this. Sorry to rush u, but ur fic is soooooo good. hehehehe. ^__^

Have u considered putting ur fic in fanfiction.net?

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!. SUSPENCE.MWHAHHAHHA. AND A CLIFFY TOO. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! I HATE CLIFFY. UR EVIL.

.....chirp....chirp....heheh....JUST KIDDING!

MWHAHAHAHAHA...............fruits......................MWHWHHAHAHAH!...............

(PRoyalAngel running around acting crazy which got her enlisted in the asylum.)

Well, that was another nice chappy! Liked it a lot! The beginning was a bit slow, but the pace picked up quite nicely. (It wouldn't be Sasuke-kun if he was not angsting, yah?) It was nice to see a bit of action at the end. I do so love a good fight scene. Heh. The battle was nicely done too!
I did notice a couple of minor spelling errors, one at the begining, i think, and Sharingan was spelled wrong once somewhere towards the end...
Also, I could be wrong, (((actually, has been known for it on more than one occasion...*snicker*))) but I'm pretty sure that the village leaders are simply refered to as 'Kage'. Hokage/Fire Country, Kazekage/Wind, Mizukage/Water, Raikage(i think)/Lightning, Tsuchikage/Earth, and Otokage/Sound. Blah! And now i'm babbling...*sigh* Sorry...Don't mind me...I'm sleepy...and i have a tendancy to go off on tangents sometimes for no apparent reason...there i go again! LOL
Can't wait to see what will become of the fight between Sasuke and Kisame!! And i wonder what he was doing attacking Sakura in the first place! Gah! What will happen between Sasu and Saku?!? And ...for real...i just can't wait to see Naruto...I just love him...heh...yeah, yeah, I know...the story aint about him...sigh...But you do have to mention him at some point, right? Hee hee...*is curious to know HIS role*...and can Sasuke summon snakes yet? *Quiver* Sasuke and snakes...Mmmmmm....heh.
Anyhows, can't wait to see the next update! And thanks for letting me know about this one! Yay!
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