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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I love how wonderfully you depict everything.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update please. How old r they in ur fic?
yeah another sakuXsasu fic. Luv the storyline. ^__^
yeah another sakuXsasu fic. Luv the storyline. ^__^
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well i'm a little pissed that i read this. Heh! Not at you, at myself for not waiting until there was more of it. This is really good. Your writing style excellent. You've done a great job with Sasuke's emotional state and how it affects his decisions. I'm very pleased. Not that my opinoin is worth more than the time it takes to read it...heh, but seriousely, this is a great start. *clapping for you!* I am very intrigued. I love the way you describe his feelings for his teammates and contrast it with the overpowering hatered for his brother. It's heart-wrenching. I think it fits with his character and the canon perfectly. And thank you! It's het! There doesn't seem to be enough of those around here. I hope that this story continues on in this fashion, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with it. If it wouldn't trouble you too much, i would be happy if you would email me when there are new updates. Of course, i don't expect it, but it would be nice. Thank you for providing a quality piece of entertainment, I can't wait to see more from you!
d(^-^)b *two thumbs up*
d(^-^)b *two thumbs up*