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for Rival: For Obito's Sake

by MistressofDragons

schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful!
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... Kakashi topping Yondaime... yum. Not that that's the only thing good about this story, of course. Just... yum, ya know?
person Rai
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me: w00h!!! Kinkyness!!!!!
Takeru: -_-'
Me: *looks at Takeru teh muse* Have you had kinky sex?
Takeru: WHA~?!?!
Me: Hee hee! Great job!

~Rai
person Ruka
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was such a sweet story!
person Kuuru-kun
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue!
person dee3o
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like, i like. something is bugging me though, i thought obito was Kakashi's teammate not sensei. I dun really know the 4th's name (his sensei) though. anyway, good story, i like it.
person blisblop
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is so easy to make people hurt ,its almost cheap.The way you turned a potential soul marring into two life affirming(three if you coun't making guy late) actions was a real WORK of art.not cheap or easy at all.Beautiful.Thank you.