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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEE!!!!! You finally updated!!!!! ^_^ <--is happy. Although Sasuke is frustrating me muchly. Very muchly. I agree with Naruto's Sasuke Has Gone of the Deep End and is Taking Me with Him Theory.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.......is Kyuubi going to make some interior remodelling??? *grins* Love your story!! Hehe me thinks that Sasuke likes Naruto for he is one of the few that dares to stand up against him while still caring for him.......Oh...I spotted a few typos in chapter two. It should have been 'convince' instead of 'conceive' I think. Probably spell check I guess. Anyway, love your story and can't wait til next chapter!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Please update fast! i really love your fic!
I love the pervert sasuke xD
Will the 3rd chapter have lemon? Love it xD
I love the pervert sasuke xD
Will the 3rd chapter have lemon? Love it xD
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hawt!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm...you spelt a lot of things wrong in there...and you spelt Ja Ne "Ja Na" xD. This is no flame. I love your story very much. =3 I hope you update soon.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahah! No offense meant but your chapter 1 really made me laugh... i was really into imagining the situation, you know... "blond hair, blue eyed..."
"....dobe"
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! that was soooooo gooood!!! no it was hilarious and I don't know why! I couldn't help but review, really! if you can see me... im still very happy right now... that was good. very good. especially the way you stopped the story... you'll really make people look forward to it! ^__^
"....dobe"
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! that was soooooo gooood!!! no it was hilarious and I don't know why! I couldn't help but review, really! if you can see me... im still very happy right now... that was good. very good. especially the way you stopped the story... you'll really make people look forward to it! ^__^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool can't wait to see this more but no pressure i know your busy thought i'd say wicked story so keep it up
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amusing. sasuke seems ooc at times, but i still like it! very enjoyable read. looking forward to more ^^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaiiiiiii!!!!!!!
i wuv your fic! very nice plot! i'd like to see this continued further on!
if you don't mind, a bit of constructive criticism: i saw quite a number of typos and/or grammatical errors. it's okay, though, cause it wasn't so bad. :)
but if you want to correct them, i would be happy to help and beta for you. :) *chibi points up* there's my email, if you're interested. let me know!
and again, i really like your fic...
update soon!
lots of hugs and kisses,
~*chibi*~
i wuv your fic! very nice plot! i'd like to see this continued further on!
if you don't mind, a bit of constructive criticism: i saw quite a number of typos and/or grammatical errors. it's okay, though, cause it wasn't so bad. :)
but if you want to correct them, i would be happy to help and beta for you. :) *chibi points up* there's my email, if you're interested. let me know!
and again, i really like your fic...
update soon!
lots of hugs and kisses,
~*chibi*~
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and i cant wait to read more of this.