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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great and even if the characters are ooc you've done it well and it fits them i love this and can't wait for the next chapter
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!! very cute, i thought you did a great job staying true to their char's while tweaking them just enough to keep it interesting. Well done ^.^
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe, funny ending!!! anyways, new reader!! i totally love it already!! soo, naruto officially belongs to sasuke now, hmmmm....oh all the fun he'll have, let's make it consentual with bondage!! XDDD update soon!!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol....that was great please write more I would love to see what happens ;)
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't have a prob with mpreg, but, please get a beta, I mean no offense, but it would really help
anyway, love your story!
love it!
Kai
anyway, love your story!
love it!
Kai
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's cool. I just don't like very much when a story is a charcter's pov one, especially if it change. But exept that, it's cool. And no, Naruto and Sasuke are not ooc, exept maybe Naruto doesn't slap but punch, it's all. Good luck for the rest!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOES!!! YOU STOPPED! T_T well i'll say i'm very pleased with the chapters so far. I like how you brought Naruto into this. ^_^ keep it up. *waits for the next chapter*
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAY!!!! u updated! me is so very HAPPY!!!!! ^^ kyuu! keep this going, onegai shimasuuuuuuu!!!!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more! This is so great, we need more stories like this! This is getting good, GO SASUKE! HES THE MAN! Anyway, thank you for writing it and please update soon!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How entertaining! I love it! Poor little Naruto! Please update soon!