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wow!! love the emotional intensity and crazy attraction here!! its obvious that neji's obsession with his cousin is something he is denying himself, not because of tenten's rejection, i think he just use tenten as an excuse....hmmmm...very interesting, if only the others knew what happened, i think gai himself or even hanabi herself will beat neji up, though i'd like to see how gai respond to how hinata is being treated by his own precious student?? and i think lee might know what happened with tenten and it won't be hard for someone like shino to put two and two together.....

hmmmm....this is a nejihina pairing, so i wonder how is it going to be a nejihina when hinata is absolutely terrified of him??

update soon!!

Oh,My God.

That Was SO Intense!And Hinata's The Prettiest!that Was So Mean...Maybe,It's Because He's Kinda Obsessed With Her Leaving Him Than Anything Else.

Poor,Poor,Little Hina!

...And Why Was He Calling Out Her Name?In His Sleep,Of All Things?Is He Falling In Love With Her?Or In Lust,Which Is Obvious.

...And Was He The One To Change Her Cloths??And Apply The Medicine? *Shivers*

I Don't Think Sex Between Cousins Counts As Incest And Neither Do Any Other Asian Countries.But Anyway...I Normally Like HinaNeji Fic But Neji's Just Plain Scary Here...

Very Original.

I Can't Wait For More.When Does Naruto And Sasuke Come In??And When Does She Tell Shino And Kiba?!

...Also,Please,No More Vomiting-Hinata!

Update Soon! ^^

P.S.Other Than A Few Spelling Mistakes,Your Skills Are Fabulous! ^^

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I really do like this story. However, I am dissapointed to see that there was only a few chapters. I understand that this is something difficult to write about. I have a finacee who was sexually abused when he was young and in foster care. My stepdaughter has had the same fate from her uncle. I assure you that you have not offended me. I just wish to see the development between Sasuke and Hinata. That is a rare pairing on this site.

omg! I had been reading all of your chapters and I really like to know of what's going to happend next! Please continue! :)

shesshh....neji's so twisted!! i wonder who he'd love more....hinata or tenten?? i wouldn't be surprised if hinata falls sick for a long period of time due to the paranoia of having neji close by!!

anyways, nice story & i enjoyed reading sick, twisted neji....and poor hinata....so, this is gonna be a sasuhina fic?? i wonder how sasuke is going to come into the story?? so, i'll be looking out for the next chappie....so, pls update soon ya!!

great job!

this story brought tears to my eyes! will you make another chapter??

This is a very beautiful story. The disclaimer at the beginning was quite amazing as well, heeheehee <3 ^_^ I like the emotion that you have been able to create; I think that you have made all the characters very alive and realistic. I also like seeing that you obviously know your stuff about Naruto, the characters, and Japan (ie, incorporating fine personality traits and having Hinata bathe herself before entering the bath [which isn't a common way to bathe in the Western world :3]). I'm impressed, and I very much hope that you will continue this story ^^

Agh, I keep forgetting to not use the heart symbol when I leave reviews on these kind of sites. Sorry, more than half of my original review was deleted because of that. I forgot how I worded it exactly, but I wanted to also tell you that your story is amazing because: the characters are very alive and realistic, the emotion you've created is very tangible and heartbreakingly beautiful, and you know your stuff about Naruto, the characters, and Japan (ie, having Hinata wash her body before bathing, as it's not a common or well-known practice within the Western world). Very well done, and I very much hope to see you continue this story.