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update NOW!!! *pretty please*! :P

I hope you update this story soon. It's fascinating, and Hinata's reaction to Neji's advances are pretty realistic. When is Sasuke going to come more into the story? Please update!

I love the new verison of chapter 3, but this wait
for the new chapter is absolutely killing me. PLEASE
update soon. Oh, and I just want to thank you again
for choosing to continue this story.

~Nessa~

WTF. why are people saying there's 4 chapters???? i only see 3 chapters

This story is pretty good so far with the exception that Neji 's sexually abusing Hinata. Please review soon! I want to know what happens next.

Great, every chapter seems to draw me in one way or another. I really like Hinata's silent resolution in this one. I wonder what Neji was dreaming about? maybe in inner struggle with wanting Hinata, but knowing he really shouldn't be messing with her. Hopefully this will be the end of NejiTen, since I really don't like that coupling. NejiHina from here on out right? well at least until way in the story when Sasuke starts acting on is feelings.

oooh this was definitely different from the old chapter 3 i like it better this way though. I wonder what he was dreaming about to be calling out her name, i think he might be battling what he is doing to her in his mind as much as she is. i'm actually feeling sad for BOTH of them, can't wait to see next chapter.

Hmm, this is a very difficult fic to read and most be very difficult to write. The situation you portray follows along very accurately. Hinata is incharacter in this instance. I'ld like to think better of Neji's character though. I don't think he would do this. However, the story could have a lot of potential to it. If your going to bring Sasuke into this story you might want to have the romance between him and Hinata develop slowly, atleast on Hinata's part. With her firstsexual experience beign so traumatic she may suffer flashbacks and anxiety when faced with future, consentual sexual relationships.

^-^ I am really likeing this story, so you mustn't take to long to update this story. Well, you can take long, but not too long. ^_~

This was funny as hell. The idea of Neji's seed bursting into hinata's mouth made me laugh like hell. I hope rock lee comes to hinata's rescue and kills that raping bitch neji