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for Break the Seal

by AshtonRose

person kitty
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Soooo.....
Does this means that Iruka Sensei has no memory of the mission? If so, then why did Kakashi-san break the seal? Also, how come Sakura is not included in the story? (I don't really like her, but just wanted to know why.)
person Vague
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person sris
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all ten chapters. And wow, I just loved it. Thank you.
person pam
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wanna sequel..i really enjoyed this fic
person Yakkai
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean make me vomit?
You almost made me cry with your awesomeness~
person Yakkai
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is probably my single most favorite KakaIru fic ever. I enjoyed it immensely, And I don't know when I started reading it, but I read the whole thing today, and yes, it meant being up til four in the morning to finish it within the span of a day. I liked the doujinshi really well, and at the place I downloaded it, I heard wind of your fic, and knew I had to quest over to AFF JUST to read it. And It was SO way worth It.
I love you.

XD
person dk_joynotsignedin
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read this fic and I thought that it would be a real shame if you never wrote a sequel, so please do! I really love this story and I hope that evil Mizuki comes back so that Kakashi can kick his butt again. And I wanna see more KakaIru lovin!
person London
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh.. so nice! Loved the ending. :)
person Berylia
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good story, althought, Mizuki was such a crazed I rape everyone on my way character.
Thank you for the story.
person Berylia
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a very good beginning, I have read the doujinshi, and your writing just keeps flowing my head with the images.
Well, now let's see what you will make with the story...