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for Break the Seal

by AshtonRose

person Charon Umino-Hatake
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! Of course we want a sequal!
person Pinky01
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i remember reading the same dj...actually im almost sure of it ^^ nice ficlet, ther really needs to be more kakairu stories out there. thanks for your story ^^
person Orion06
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur fic was really good i loved it and would really like a sequel plz! Keep on writting fanfiction our i'll hunt you down and cut u into little tiny pieces
person sunnysideup
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah, yah, I would love to read a sequel.
person Polka dot
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO does that mean that Iruka knows that Kaka was with the ANBU or does he not remember anything still? It's a good end but I'm left a little hanging.
person Turin
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... that was one fine fic, I HAD to review! The story was good, and the end was great! I like the idea of them becoming life-bonded as well as Soul mates. n_n Kakashi better be careful... BUt a sequel with that premise is a great one, what with Iruka, suddenly having premonitions, etc..
person Cim
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A sequel would be awesome ^^ I would love if you'd write one
person jdauss1
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make a sequel!!! I really liked this fic and I hope you decide to write more. You left ways to do it - that's for sure. You can have Mizuki come back and cause more havoc and/or you can put them in a situation where Kakashi needs to tell Iruka about the seal, how he had to take it off, and the effects. I guess what I'm saying is... please write more!!!
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Iruka as a seme! I never thought about that, or read it, for that matter XD It's very interesting though, for sure, and sweet, too. This is a great conclusion to an excellent story, and I'm sad to see it end (although, I think there may be a sequel in demand from what I've read ^_~), but I've really enjoying the ride! Even if Mizuki dragged himself off somewhere, or someone else drug him off somewhere, It was awfully satisfying for him to get the smirk wiped off his snide face. I like the fact that Jiraiya popped in, too--Jiraiya and Tsunade both seemed a little surprised at Kakashi's lecherous acts with his sensei, but who could resist? It's a perfect angsty match made in heaven.

All in all, this whole story has been fun, angsty, and steamy, which sets it up for one of my favorite all time KakaIru fanfictions. Hope to catch a sequel from you if you're not too busy and I'm very likely to be re-reading the first and last chapters a lot in the meantime. ^_~ *gives you dolphin and scarecrow cookies*
person Ivory_Stone
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigawd...That was the most awesome story I have ever read. And it kept me on the edge of my seat too...Seriously, I would check back every day just to see if you had updated. I BEG of you! Please let there be a sequal! KakaIru is my favorite pairing and I just love how you were able to write for them. And everything was perfect. I could picture everything in my mind as if I were watching the anime. Keep up the awesome work!